Disclaimer: Dragon Ball is the property of Akira Toriyama. I do not profit from writing fanfiction.
Dedicated to Satu-D-2: because you love both Chiaotzu and Tien. Nice knowing we are not alone.
"Dripping water hollows out stone, not through force but through persistence." ~ Ovid
PERSISTENCE
A Tien & Chiaotzu Fanfiction
by
Esplandian
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"Why?" reproach smudges his innocent, childish voice; crying threatens to drown his words.
"Why, Tien?"
His companion, tall and unshakable as stone, raises his shaven head to the starry sky: his three eyes barely flicking; trained as an assassin, he betrays no emotion.
Silence.
Silence: distant, uncomfortable, icy as the glacial winds. They known each other, as no one else ever will; yet some doors remain closed, unreachableā¦.
"Why did you do the same, just like with InoShikaCho?"
The child of cadaveric pallor, infinitely loyal, sows the untouchable question: what dwells in the abyss of Tien's heart.
"If she loves us ..."
The celestial vault over the darkest forest, unmistakably clear away from all civilization: both humans, insignificant amidst a sea of stars.
"If she loves you ..."
Once companions, accomplices, friends, brothers; both even, equal, side by side: corn over the fire, a volleyball rematch, laughs and jokes under the summer's sun ...
Time, please stop!
Now, adult and child, father and son; both uneven, unequal, divergent. Chiaotzu and Tien: eternal youth, fleeting mortality!
Time, please take us back!
"Why do you always hurt her? Why do you always hurt yourself so badly?"
His tears in their persistence, drop by drop, crush the unbeating stone.
"If you love Lunch too ... why do you let her down? Why do you let her go?"
Word Count (Pages): 220 words.
Author's Note: Thank you for reading and reviewing, beloved readers and Crane School Fans. Recently, I am translating some of my own drabbles and fics: please let me know if anything could be improved, I would gladly appreciate any pointers and constructive criticism.
If you like in Tien, Chiaotzu, Master Shen, Tao Pai Pai, and everything related to the Crane School, I'll happily recommend all Satu-D-2 fics, she is an upstanding author with hundreds of Tien & Chiaotzu friendship stories. Go and read her right now! Let those pretty reviews flow!
Also, I have the audacity to recommend:
Oh, Kami, at her age! (Uranai Baba x Master Shen)
Romantic drabble about Master Shen and Uranai Baba (YES! Now you can take your eyes out with a rusty fork), with a brief cameo of all the Red Ribbon officials; some Tien & Chiaotzu goodness as well.
Interlude (Mercenary Tao x Colonel Violet)
Mercenary Tao celebrates his 20th anniversary as an assassin with Colonel Violet. (Yes, another crack!pairing that will make you cringe for sure).
A Hundred Voices (Many characters from DB and DBZ)
English translation of "Cien de sus voces", 100 hundred stories about Dragon World and all the characters that inhabit it.
Again, thank you very much for reading: please, be kind and leave a review. Your opinions are highly appreciated.