for Moments of Impact9/29/2016 c1 CShipper
It's a very nice idea, but I feel that it's too rushed. And it's very difficult to know who's saying what and when and all that. It's a great start, but be sure to keep in mind of the pacing and what the characters say. :) Good job, overall, though.
It's a very nice idea, but I feel that it's too rushed. And it's very difficult to know who's saying what and when and all that. It's a great start, but be sure to keep in mind of the pacing and what the characters say. :) Good job, overall, though.
312/26/2013 c1 Guest
Love it! Cant wait for the next chapter!
Love it! Cant wait for the next chapter!
12/26/2013 c1 Nouqueret
Really lijes this versión . Ive read others were Killian is in cursed storybrook, but yours is much verter resumed . Keep up with the plot,
Really lijes this versión . Ive read others were Killian is in cursed storybrook, but yours is much verter resumed . Keep up with the plot,
