for Code Horizon1/31/2014 c3 
4Fireminer
What do you mean by "four months"? The next chapter takes place four months latter, or you will update this in four months? Hope not the latter.
Anyway, nice chapter.
4FireminerWhat do you mean by "four months"? The next chapter takes place four months latter, or you will update this in four months? Hope not the latter.
Anyway, nice chapter.
1/15/2014 c2 Rei Rusuragi
you're doing great in my eyes MM Browsing, so do your best in writing the story and don't be sad if it's not perfect since there is no perfect stories after all.
With Kind Regards
Rei Rusuragi
you're doing great in my eyes MM Browsing, so do your best in writing the story and don't be sad if it's not perfect since there is no perfect stories after all.
With Kind Regards
Rei Rusuragi
1/15/2014 c2 Kinunatzs The Eternal
i don't have to repeat what i said since you already know anyway nice chapter
i don't have to repeat what i said since you already know anyway nice chapter
12/29/2013 c1 Fireminer
Well, you've got quite a good jump start I say. However, you might want to double check your typos and grammar. I advise finding a prooreader. Plus, the character's personality, don't tell out at once. Let them speak and the readers to think.
Hope you update this soon!
Well, you've got quite a good jump start I say. However, you might want to double check your typos and grammar. I advise finding a prooreader. Plus, the character's personality, don't tell out at once. Let them speak and the readers to think.
Hope you update this soon!
12/29/2013 c1 Kinunatzs The Eternal
um dude i'm pretty sure that you just copy paste this from the Novel or the Anime and replaced the MC with the Code Geass Characters and pls diverse from the Cannon and Cannon dialogue pls anyway it's still a nice start
um dude i'm pretty sure that you just copy paste this from the Novel or the Anime and replaced the MC with the Code Geass Characters and pls diverse from the Cannon and Cannon dialogue pls anyway it's still a nice start
