for The Risk You Take12/27/2014 c1 EvanJSanders2
Um well I think I might have to say this since no one has yet :/
IT'S AMAZING! :P
Um well I think I might have to say this since no one has yet :/
IT'S AMAZING! :P
12/11/2014 c1 Raigat
This was really good. You're probably the best author I've found at writing a love scene that's actually romantic. Excellent job.
This was really good. You're probably the best author I've found at writing a love scene that's actually romantic. Excellent job.
8/13/2014 c1 Nami-chan
I loved is really perfect :3
I loved is really perfect :3
7/11/2014 c1 Floweravenue
This story is amazing and I didn't feel this is very long. I love how the main scene was romantic and full of love, it's very hard to find it write like this. But of course, the whole story was brilliant. Very well done!
This story is amazing and I didn't feel this is very long. I love how the main scene was romantic and full of love, it's very hard to find it write like this. But of course, the whole story was brilliant. Very well done!
7/3/2014 c1 
9bobafett177
Great story? But one question. By her "Barrier" you mean her hymen right? I haven't heard it used that way before so I want to know if it is.
9bobafett177Great story? But one question. By her "Barrier" you mean her hymen right? I haven't heard it used that way before so I want to know if it is.
3/21/2014 c1 Anonymous
Great I LOVED it! Eremika 4ever 3
Great I LOVED it! Eremika 4ever 3
3/6/2014 c1 10meliikasa
Great! The sex scene sounded so realistic!
I totally agree for them being too young for this, but the world where they live is cruel.
10meliikasaGreat! The sex scene sounded so realistic!
I totally agree for them being too young for this, but the world where they live is cruel.
1/25/2014 c1 Guest
Very enjoyable to read, and good writing.
Very enjoyable to read, and good writing.
12/23/2013 c1 13Dr.Archangel
I'll admit and agree with you, they are too young for sex, but you make an elegant reason for them to take their chances. I do not regret reading this, it's strong, well written, and visual.
I must ask with you something from this one line:
"It was fortunate that Mikasa herself did not find it as painful as she heard a woman's first time was supposed to be, perhaps because her barrier had already broken long before she engaged in intimacy with a man"
I hate to be blunt in my words, but has Mikasa been masturbating? if that's somewhere in another fanfiction, then I suppose that's where i'll find my answer. Again, a compelling story.
13Dr.ArchangelI'll admit and agree with you, they are too young for sex, but you make an elegant reason for them to take their chances. I do not regret reading this, it's strong, well written, and visual.
I must ask with you something from this one line:
"It was fortunate that Mikasa herself did not find it as painful as she heard a woman's first time was supposed to be, perhaps because her barrier had already broken long before she engaged in intimacy with a man"
I hate to be blunt in my words, but has Mikasa been masturbating? if that's somewhere in another fanfiction, then I suppose that's where i'll find my answer. Again, a compelling story.
12/22/2013 c1 dragonball256
I finally read through your other story and decided to read this piece. Glad I did cause it was great. :)
I finally read through your other story and decided to read this piece. Glad I did cause it was great. :)
