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2/1 c1 Bluerose160
Can’t wait for part two! I just found this 2 hours ago and got through all nine of the chapters. If the next bit takes place a year later will we still hear about bits of the vacation? Will there be flashbacks?
2/8/2019 c9 4SilverDragon13
Love this story cant waot to read more
10/19/2018 c9 1twibe
Omg can't believe you haven't made a sequel!
3/16/2018 c1 iloveyou1234
come back! please
3/16/2018 c9 iloveyou1234
omg this is so cute! I really like Kate.
1/28/2018 c9 Guest
This is the best Godric story I've ever read! And I loved how she was able to protect godricnfrom the sun just by willing it. I know it's been a few years, but I really hope you'll continue this eventually!
6/22/2017 c9 111Verbophobic
Did part 2 ever get posted?
1/23/2017 c1 Guest
Great story man
9/9/2016 c9 8kykyxstandler
where is part 2
i need part 2 in my life
please post part 2
please please pretty please
6/18/2016 c9 4Zoey24
You have no idea how excited I was to see if you posted Part 2 since I just finished reading all the chapters and thought that 'oh it's been a couple of years, she probably posted tons of chapters by now'. But NO! That was not the case! After loving Kate and Godric's adventures together and curious on what she is exactly, and excited to see Eric (& others) reactions to Godric being alive I was hit with the huge sign of "NOT TODAY! (or ever)" when I looked for new chapters. It's somewhat bittersweet. Thank you for creating and sharing an amazing story though, I'll always pass by to reread it.
4/1/2016 c1 21TSOHG A MA I
This is great! I hope you get around to posting part two sometime! I really like this story, since you very skillfully manage to portray the personalities of the characters. Many fanfictions featuring Godric either paint him as some sort of white knight, or hell, I don't even know - the dialogue ends up all stiff and not right. Very few actually manage to capture the 'voice' of the characters in their stories, and I like that you can do that.

I also like Kate, and her reactions to everything. She seems very normal, and her actions are very believable for a human. I like that she wasn't attracted to Godric at first, because that's believable too; he looks like a teenager. A lot of fanfictions go into great detail describing his looks and how attractive he is, but they never go into detail about how creepy it is when a woman in their early to late twenties is crushing on a guy who looks like a hot teenage boy. That's not cool. So I like your "let's be friends" approach to this. It's a good kickstarter. I don't think any romance story with Godric should focus so much on his appearance. That's kind of messed up. So actual relationship development is crucial.

Hope you get back to writing soon! It seems you've been away for a while :)
12/15/2015 c9 25travelbabe
I really look forward to the sequel. Great story!
9/9/2015 c1 l
Jesus, easy on the American hating. We read too you know.
8/19/2015 c9 treewitch7031
Excellent story. I am looking forward to the continuation.
9/18/2014 c9 10Mystic Vampyre
Love this story. I read it all in one sitting! I Can not wait to see what happenes in part 2. I hope you continue this soon.
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