for Seal of Darkness11/9/2019 c8 Axccel
"There are more good people than bad" has nothing to do with why she shouldn't kill bad people. I get it, though, Batman doesn't really have an argument for not killing them. And it isn't like she's killing pickpockets or something. These are people who normally would have been killed as a military action until one or two hundred years ago.
My main problem with their fight is that Batman relies heavily on gadgets, yet you had him pretty much use none in their fight. This is a common theme in DC Comics in general involving him. To drive up tension they'll have Batman lose because he didn't use gadgets. Then, when he finally wins, it's entirely because he used gadgets...which he could and should have done in the first place.
"There are more good people than bad" has nothing to do with why she shouldn't kill bad people. I get it, though, Batman doesn't really have an argument for not killing them. And it isn't like she's killing pickpockets or something. These are people who normally would have been killed as a military action until one or two hundred years ago.
My main problem with their fight is that Batman relies heavily on gadgets, yet you had him pretty much use none in their fight. This is a common theme in DC Comics in general involving him. To drive up tension they'll have Batman lose because he didn't use gadgets. Then, when he finally wins, it's entirely because he used gadgets...which he could and should have done in the first place.
2/3/2019 c11 Jose19
The thing that Tsukune did to Akasha was a natural reaction towards the feelings of Outer Moka.
The thing that Tsukune did to Akasha was a natural reaction towards the feelings of Outer Moka.
4/29/2018 c39 COBRS DARKNISS
Okay I am on Chapter 39, and gotta day loving this story and am interested in the sequel HOWEVER!
This cheating BS that Akashiya is doing with Issa is REALLY REALLLLLLYYYY making me just want to stop reading.
Like seriously dude you have made me just ashamed of her, and just absolutely hate Issa.
Not to mention she of course looks like the sweet and innocent Outer Moka from the manga and anime, but is like doing all this ludicrous stuff.
I know your working on your sequel but I would really appreciate it if you could just tell me if it gets better... if even fucking slightly.
Okay I am on Chapter 39, and gotta day loving this story and am interested in the sequel HOWEVER!
This cheating BS that Akashiya is doing with Issa is REALLY REALLLLLLYYYY making me just want to stop reading.
Like seriously dude you have made me just ashamed of her, and just absolutely hate Issa.
Not to mention she of course looks like the sweet and innocent Outer Moka from the manga and anime, but is like doing all this ludicrous stuff.
I know your working on your sequel but I would really appreciate it if you could just tell me if it gets better... if even fucking slightly.
21/19/2018 c46 Carycomic
WOW!
This was quite the denouement, Raph. On the one hand, I'm glad the Good Guys won. But, on the other hand? Well, to paraphrase the immortal words of the marvelous Benjamin Parker. . .
"With great victories often come great prices.
English translation: it's too bad Akasha and Bruce couldn't live happily ever after. But, at least he and Morrigan's consoling of each other has the potential for positive growth. Who know? They might even stay in touch enough to aid each other during the aforementioned. . .CLASH OF REALMS!*
*Insert melodramatic reverb here.
WOW!
This was quite the denouement, Raph. On the one hand, I'm glad the Good Guys won. But, on the other hand? Well, to paraphrase the immortal words of the marvelous Benjamin Parker. . .
"With great victories often come great prices.
English translation: it's too bad Akasha and Bruce couldn't live happily ever after. But, at least he and Morrigan's consoling of each other has the potential for positive growth. Who know? They might even stay in touch enough to aid each other during the aforementioned. . .CLASH OF REALMS!*
*Insert melodramatic reverb here.
1/18/2018 c46 DOOMRAIDER
Bravo RaphaelTMNT on the fantastic story you've made. I'll admit at first this story didn't seem like much when I first read it but after awhile as the plot kept getting more and more complex and the tension kept getting higher and higher with each chapter I got hooked on this story. Keep doing the great work your doing. Can't wait for the sequel!
Bravo RaphaelTMNT on the fantastic story you've made. I'll admit at first this story didn't seem like much when I first read it but after awhile as the plot kept getting more and more complex and the tension kept getting higher and higher with each chapter I got hooked on this story. Keep doing the great work your doing. Can't wait for the sequel!
1/18/2018 c46 Batmanknight76
Wow what an incredible ending to an incredible story and I'm so glad their will be a sequel and this time with the JLA playing a role. I personally hope that Akasha comes back, things can't end the way they did between she and Bruce it's just so sad:( Whelp you've got me pumped for the next installment so I'll have my eyes open.
Wow what an incredible ending to an incredible story and I'm so glad their will be a sequel and this time with the JLA playing a role. I personally hope that Akasha comes back, things can't end the way they did between she and Bruce it's just so sad:( Whelp you've got me pumped for the next installment so I'll have my eyes open.
1/17/2018 c46 The Coke-aholic
Slightly disappointed that it wasn't the whole Justice League getting involved, but then again considering how OP Supes and WW was that was probably for the best. Akasha's dead, this is DC so that won't last long. And FT is trying to establish their own Legion of Doom, that is so gonna blow up in their smug idiotic faces. Looking forward to the sequel.
Slightly disappointed that it wasn't the whole Justice League getting involved, but then again considering how OP Supes and WW was that was probably for the best. Akasha's dead, this is DC so that won't last long. And FT is trying to establish their own Legion of Doom, that is so gonna blow up in their smug idiotic faces. Looking forward to the sequel.
1/17/2018 c46 UltamaDragonking
Oh man this ending was spectacular, wow! Superman, Zatanna and Akasha were the three MVP's in stopping Fairy Tale, and I'm glad both Superman and Wonder Woman weren't down powered during the main battle:) But man is Akasha really dead? Please I hope she isn't, she really did love Bruce and that showed during their encounter on the battlefield, man I hope to hell she somehow survived. After all there was no body inside the chamber, but dang that really hit the heart but I hope somehow she survived. And Bruce didn't even find out the truth that it wasn't her that ordered Issa to kill him:( Man this sequel can't come any faster and I'm excited to see it looks to be pointing in the direction of involving the Justice League, man I can't wait for the Clash of Realms premise if nothing more than to see the status quo of things.
And at least Bruce got to spend a steamy night with Morrigan before she left and I like the idea she helped him clean up Gotham before she did, but in the end he was left alone but hopefully that won't be for long. Trinity's team work was awesome in the end here, great ending and I desperately want to see the follow up to this, please don't keep me waiting for long.
Oh man this ending was spectacular, wow! Superman, Zatanna and Akasha were the three MVP's in stopping Fairy Tale, and I'm glad both Superman and Wonder Woman weren't down powered during the main battle:) But man is Akasha really dead? Please I hope she isn't, she really did love Bruce and that showed during their encounter on the battlefield, man I hope to hell she somehow survived. After all there was no body inside the chamber, but dang that really hit the heart but I hope somehow she survived. And Bruce didn't even find out the truth that it wasn't her that ordered Issa to kill him:( Man this sequel can't come any faster and I'm excited to see it looks to be pointing in the direction of involving the Justice League, man I can't wait for the Clash of Realms premise if nothing more than to see the status quo of things.
And at least Bruce got to spend a steamy night with Morrigan before she left and I like the idea she helped him clean up Gotham before she did, but in the end he was left alone but hopefully that won't be for long. Trinity's team work was awesome in the end here, great ending and I desperately want to see the follow up to this, please don't keep me waiting for long.
1/17/2018 c46 HonkeyBong
This was a journey of awesomeness with a bombastic ending. Sad to see Akasha killed off, i take it the sequel won't have AkashaxBatman. At least she took Gonzo down with her before dying off for good.
Looking forward to the next story, will be very interesting to see fairy tale interact with the likes of villains such as Solomon Grundy, General Zod Lex Luthor and so on.
This was a journey of awesomeness with a bombastic ending. Sad to see Akasha killed off, i take it the sequel won't have AkashaxBatman. At least she took Gonzo down with her before dying off for good.
Looking forward to the next story, will be very interesting to see fairy tale interact with the likes of villains such as Solomon Grundy, General Zod Lex Luthor and so on.
1/17/2018 c46 Ragnarok
Ha! Morrigan is gonna have the Bat’s baby! LOL!
Ha! Morrigan is gonna have the Bat’s baby! LOL!
1/17/2018 c46 Ego Killer
That was a magnificent ending. I honestly am not saddened by Akasha dying. The harlot deserved it.
That was a magnificent ending. I honestly am not saddened by Akasha dying. The harlot deserved it.
1/17/2018 c46 Guest
Does that mean that you will do more of snow queen of justice?
Does that mean that you will do more of snow queen of justice?
