for Life of the Independent5/25 c29 DarthDane
I don't know if I'm missing something or not, but it has been bugging me for the past few chapters. Is Harry not emancipated and THE Lord Potter? So dumbledore had no legal hold on him whatsoever even with Sirius back? And why did he have to ask Sirius to buy him a new broomstick when he has complete access to his own faults? Why is he letting Sirius and Remus make choices for him when he is technically his own adult. They're basically coddling him. It seems like him being a lord and emancipated has been lost throughout the chapters.
I'm also kind of disappointed in the way harry is acting. He knows occlumency, yet is so prone emotional outbursts. He even mentioned he can turn it on or off. Yet it seems like he is not even using them.
I don't know if I'm missing something or not, but it has been bugging me for the past few chapters. Is Harry not emancipated and THE Lord Potter? So dumbledore had no legal hold on him whatsoever even with Sirius back? And why did he have to ask Sirius to buy him a new broomstick when he has complete access to his own faults? Why is he letting Sirius and Remus make choices for him when he is technically his own adult. They're basically coddling him. It seems like him being a lord and emancipated has been lost throughout the chapters.
I'm also kind of disappointed in the way harry is acting. He knows occlumency, yet is so prone emotional outbursts. He even mentioned he can turn it on or off. Yet it seems like he is not even using them.
5/19 c43 lmill123
This was a really great story. I'm just sorry that you never finished it. I really hope you come back and finish it.
I love the friendship between Harry and Lucas. I especially enjoyed how they showed Neville what a real friendship was suppose to be like. Ron and Hermione's reactions when Neville started doing better in his classes was so typical them. It wasn't that Neville was stupid or not powerful, but he lacked self-confidence.
Besides, it would be so fitting if Dumbledore was knocked from his welfare pedestal.
This was a really great story. I'm just sorry that you never finished it. I really hope you come back and finish it.
I love the friendship between Harry and Lucas. I especially enjoyed how they showed Neville what a real friendship was suppose to be like. Ron and Hermione's reactions when Neville started doing better in his classes was so typical them. It wasn't that Neville was stupid or not powerful, but he lacked self-confidence.
Besides, it would be so fitting if Dumbledore was knocked from his welfare pedestal.
5/16 c43 
1bellerose slytherpuff
Please update, this is a really good fanfiction. I can't wait for Neville to find out James is Harry.
1bellerose slytherpuffPlease update, this is a really good fanfiction. I can't wait for Neville to find out James is Harry.
5/9 c14 Guest
PLAN B, PLAN B, I just want to see him FAIL!
PLAN B, PLAN B, I just want to see him FAIL!
5/11 c16 arckane
Damn I liked the story but that fucking Thomas kid acts way to gay bro I mean he’s like a clingy fucking ex girlfriend dude wtf
Damn I liked the story but that fucking Thomas kid acts way to gay bro I mean he’s like a clingy fucking ex girlfriend dude wtf
5/8 c7 Guest
Dark Harry? Smart harry!
Dark Harry? Smart harry!
5/8 c43 Guest
More, more, more, more, more, more, more!
More, more, more, more, more, more, more!
5/6 c43 Guest
Please update soon
Please update soon
5/5 c7 Guest
Isn't Ollivander a Lord of the Ollivander House?
Shouldn't he recognise the Potter Emblem that is on the Lord Ring? :\
Isn't Ollivander a Lord of the Ollivander House?
Shouldn't he recognise the Potter Emblem that is on the Lord Ring? :\
5/6 c43 1Lord Cornichon
I'm french and i read most of the french fanfiction, so this one is my first one in english and i like it a lot ! Thank you for what you doing !
1Lord CornichonI'm french and i read most of the french fanfiction, so this one is my first one in english and i like it a lot ! Thank you for what you doing !
