for Pool Party5/7 c1 Ruby ever R
Hello,Hello, I am Ruby, a friend from China. I read your Pool Party and liked it very much. Can you allow me to show this to my friends from China?
Waiting for your reply.
Hello,Hello, I am Ruby, a friend from China. I read your Pool Party and liked it very much. Can you allow me to show this to my friends from China?
Waiting for your reply.
5/7 c2 Ruby
Hello, I am ruby, a friend from China. I read your Pool Party and liked it very much. Can you allow me to show this to my friends from China?
Waiting for your reply
Hello, I am ruby, a friend from China. I read your Pool Party and liked it very much. Can you allow me to show this to my friends from China?
Waiting for your reply
3/25/2015 c1 JaneShadow
I think that it is just plain awesome and that it shows pinkie's personality well, and right from the get-go too.
I think that it is just plain awesome and that it shows pinkie's personality well, and right from the get-go too.
1/21/2014 c3 Aquinomas
I found a link of your work in deviantart and i'm glad. You made a good job, the way you write this feels so natural.
I really hope that you can continue with the picture of Rainbow/Fluttershy and Rarity/Applejack.
Have a nice day.
I found a link of your work in deviantart and i'm glad. You made a good job, the way you write this feels so natural.
I really hope that you can continue with the picture of Rainbow/Fluttershy and Rarity/Applejack.
Have a nice day.
8/3/2013 c3 
19AmIObsessed
You HAVE to make more Twipie stories! :3 and I thought the characters were perfect, you didn't mess up on them at all. This was an excellent ending, considering you had a writer's block while writing it, I love it! xD
19AmIObsessedYou HAVE to make more Twipie stories! :3 and I thought the characters were perfect, you didn't mess up on them at all. This was an excellent ending, considering you had a writer's block while writing it, I love it! xD
7/25/2013 c3 Guest
Dose anyone eles feel the sudden erge to go swimming?
Dose anyone eles feel the sudden erge to go swimming?
7/25/2013 c3 twinkie love
HHGGGNNN! I think I'd have a HEART ATTACK! so fucking cute x3
HHGGGNNN! I think I'd have a HEART ATTACK! so fucking cute x3
7/24/2013 c3 The Mad Batter
I don't read much girl on girl mlp stories, but this one... there's just something about it...
I don't read much girl on girl mlp stories, but this one... there's just something about it...
7/23/2013 c3 Too lazyyyyyy
IT'S TOO CUTE! I love love love this story! Please post more!
IT'S TOO CUTE! I love love love this story! Please post more!
7/22/2013 c3 7Wolfie 03
YYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYY! I wasn't sure if you were going to add anything to this story and when I had seen that you posted it as 'complete' the other day I had all but given up. I think there's more you could do with this story (maybe, but that's more of a mundane, or maybe end of college type of thing) but it's definitely worth seeing the others of the mane six! (Like Rarijack and Flutterdash) because you mentioned at least AJ and Rarity, so therefore the best way would be to complete the circle. I vote YES YES YES!
As a side note, the moment of Rarity coming in the room instead of Pinkie Pie was a good one. Lol
7Wolfie 03YYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYY! I wasn't sure if you were going to add anything to this story and when I had seen that you posted it as 'complete' the other day I had all but given up. I think there's more you could do with this story (maybe, but that's more of a mundane, or maybe end of college type of thing) but it's definitely worth seeing the others of the mane six! (Like Rarijack and Flutterdash) because you mentioned at least AJ and Rarity, so therefore the best way would be to complete the circle. I vote YES YES YES!
As a side note, the moment of Rarity coming in the room instead of Pinkie Pie was a good one. Lol
6/17/2013 c2 12BlueDragonIsAwesome
I'm interested. In fact, I'd very much like to see more! Your writing style is nice, and the idea (and the fact it was based in college) was hilarious. As for constructive criticism, I'd just like to point out that you need a comma when addressing someone. Instead of "Hey Twilight I just..." it should be "Hey, Twilight, I just..." Along with addressing someone, any opening dependent clauses should have commas along with them. Anyway, I can't wait for an update! Good job. :)
12BlueDragonIsAwesomeI'm interested. In fact, I'd very much like to see more! Your writing style is nice, and the idea (and the fact it was based in college) was hilarious. As for constructive criticism, I'd just like to point out that you need a comma when addressing someone. Instead of "Hey Twilight I just..." it should be "Hey, Twilight, I just..." Along with addressing someone, any opening dependent clauses should have commas along with them. Anyway, I can't wait for an update! Good job. :)
6/12/2013 c2 twinkie love D
continuous please I love this shipping x3
continuous please I love this shipping x3
