for Super Spiders and Rats4/21/2019 c5 Brave Chaser
You do know who Marcuses creator is, Right?
You do know who Marcuses creator is, Right?
8/3/2017 c2 Lesley Black Velvet
In the words of the mighty Saitama...SHORTEN THIS ORIGIN STORY TO TWENTY WORDS OR LESS!
It was going great. We're having a blast, then you pad it with nearly a hundred words of backstory nearly everyone who knows Spider-Man famn knows. It's pretty obvious.
Love Only,
ItsMeVader
In the words of the mighty Saitama...SHORTEN THIS ORIGIN STORY TO TWENTY WORDS OR LESS!
It was going great. We're having a blast, then you pad it with nearly a hundred words of backstory nearly everyone who knows Spider-Man famn knows. It's pretty obvious.
Love Only,
ItsMeVader
8/12/2016 c1 Guest
I have 1 word for this...AWSOME!
I have 1 word for this...AWSOME!
7/23/2016 c2 Lionblazeforever
Dude. There's a thing called A SECRET IDENTITY! YOU DON'T JUST GO PORING YOUR FRICKEN LIFE STORY TO RANDOM PEOPLE!
Dude. There's a thing called A SECRET IDENTITY! YOU DON'T JUST GO PORING YOUR FRICKEN LIFE STORY TO RANDOM PEOPLE!
7/23/2016 c1 Lionblazeforever
Lol third question Spiderman asks to a random stranger "can I stay at your place?" Dude. You don't just do that.
Lol third question Spiderman asks to a random stranger "can I stay at your place?" Dude. You don't just do that.
2/24/2015 c3 Guest
Be more creative and use better vocab. The story is jumping all over the place. Have it flow.
Be more creative and use better vocab. The story is jumping all over the place. Have it flow.
10/20/2014 c1 DAVEN
SPIDERS CAN BEAT RATS USEING their fangs.
SPIDERS CAN BEAT RATS USEING their fangs.
10/11/2014 c5 Omar Martinez
Dude, next chapter you should have Spider-Man design costumes for Adam, Bree, and Chase, and U have to give them good hero names.
Dude, next chapter you should have Spider-Man design costumes for Adam, Bree, and Chase, and U have to give them good hero names.
9/4/2013 c5 Libbygirl
Do u think you could write a chapter where spike chase's glitch comes out?! I would luv u if u did! THANKS!
Do u think you could write a chapter where spike chase's glitch comes out?! I would luv u if u did! THANKS!
9/4/2013 c3 tt
awesome.
awesome.
7/25/2013 c1 Guest
hi I'm a kid planning on joining fanfiction god that should be in the dictionary oh sorry but can people adopt your discontinued story?thanks for reading my review really am happy about it sorry can't spell apreciate see
hi I'm a kid planning on joining fanfiction god that should be in the dictionary oh sorry but can people adopt your discontinued story?thanks for reading my review really am happy about it sorry can't spell apreciate see
7/14/2013 c4 Guest
I loved it! Please continue. also please make a Peter and Bree romance it would be boss,swag,epic,great, and all the other meanings of cool! But KILL Bree's boyfriend first so it's not an awkward drama about love... but anyways awsome so far please continue and ROCK ON!
I loved it! Please continue. also please make a Peter and Bree romance it would be boss,swag,epic,great, and all the other meanings of cool! But KILL Bree's boyfriend first so it's not an awkward drama about love... but anyways awsome so far please continue and ROCK ON!
3/26/2013 c4 Am I Somebody
Love. So definitely ultimate Pete. Cool. When is this before he dated MJ after? When during Lab Rats does it take place?
Love. So definitely ultimate Pete. Cool. When is this before he dated MJ after? When during Lab Rats does it take place?
3/26/2013 c1 Am I Somebody
Great. Is this Ultimate Peter cause it feels like it. How will his strength compare to Adams? Adams probably stronger since he stopped a train. What pairing are you going for? Is there a pairing? I'm babbling aren't I? Well good work and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Great. Is this Ultimate Peter cause it feels like it. How will his strength compare to Adams? Adams probably stronger since he stopped a train. What pairing are you going for? Is there a pairing? I'm babbling aren't I? Well good work and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
