for Ride And Rider a Brecon Beacons Story1/11/2015 c4 Guest
Oh please update soon!?
Oh please update soon!?
1/10/2015 c4 yashendra2797
Wow. Awesome chapter, just do two things. First, get a beta. You have some grammatical errors, including using conscience instead of conscious. Second, turn down the wild antics of the Flock. Its an SAS camp, not a military school... Update soon!
Wow. Awesome chapter, just do two things. First, get a beta. You have some grammatical errors, including using conscience instead of conscious. Second, turn down the wild antics of the Flock. Its an SAS camp, not a military school... Update soon!
11/15/2014 c15 Errmmmm
Wow! This is really good, please write more soon!
Wow! This is really good, please write more soon!
11/9/2014 c3 DSFGHJ
MI6 Is an intel agency funded by the British government.
An m16 is a military-grade rifle that is one of the American government's favorite guns.
MI6 Is an intel agency funded by the British government.
An m16 is a military-grade rifle that is one of the American government's favorite guns.
10/23/2014 c15 Guest
Great story keep it up
Great story keep it up
10/10/2014 c1 Grey
Bad wolf...
Why does it keep following me wherever I go?
Bad wolf...
Why does it keep following me wherever I go?
9/20/2014 c15 
1Sylvakona
Awesome! Can't wait for the next chapter! You could add a little more detail in your story though.
1SylvakonaAwesome! Can't wait for the next chapter! You could add a little more detail in your story though.
8/15/2014 c15 Guest
MORE!
MORE!
8/8/2014 c15 3UnsuccessfullyPublishedAuthor
Great story, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
3UnsuccessfullyPublishedAuthorGreat story, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
