for Always Snow11/4/2019 c3 Guest
You know 1987 is a important date for fnaf?
You know 1987 is a important date for fnaf?
6/13/2019 c7 Rueneko 11
I'm sad you stopped.
For your information he was sat under the stairs - you
I will try to do all pe peeves I've seen. - Lily
Your going to want to see this - Tom
I'm sad you stopped.
For your information he was sat under the stairs - you
I will try to do all pe peeves I've seen. - Lily
Your going to want to see this - Tom
7/2/2018 c7 Guest
Yay! A fellow human who cries at the terrible grammar in these stories. I have found so many good plots ruined by terrible spelling and grammar that it's not even funny. These children need either a beta reader or to go back to English class, honestly. Btw ur story is great, thx for continuing it.
-This has been a rant by a lady too lazy to log in again.
Yay! A fellow human who cries at the terrible grammar in these stories. I have found so many good plots ruined by terrible spelling and grammar that it's not even funny. These children need either a beta reader or to go back to English class, honestly. Btw ur story is great, thx for continuing it.
-This has been a rant by a lady too lazy to log in again.
3/23/2018 c7 AwesomeEevee
THANK YOU! I go to Challenger School and they have taught me subject, predicate, and such since first grade or younger. When I see this I am SO frustrated. Finally, SOMEONE who feels my pain!
THANK YOU! I go to Challenger School and they have taught me subject, predicate, and such since first grade or younger. When I see this I am SO frustrated. Finally, SOMEONE who feels my pain!
8/24/2017 c7 Guest
Ok... I'll honor what you said. This was a great story though, especially chapter 6. Thanks for writing and I hope I will find the continued project on your account.
Ok... I'll honor what you said. This was a great story though, especially chapter 6. Thanks for writing and I hope I will find the continued project on your account.
8/24/2017 c3 Guest
This has me crying already, but thank you very much for writing! Beautiful and so sad from the first chapter on.
This has me crying already, but thank you very much for writing! Beautiful and so sad from the first chapter on.
3/10/2017 c6 
20Siera-Knightwalker
Are you really going to write more or is this the end? Its...very sad. And I'm sort of surprised no one did anything. Makes me wonder why Sandman couldn't enter through the wards. I really want to know what Jack was feeling when he saw Hermione die and Nix just lose all hope. Did she know Jack was there?
20Siera-KnightwalkerAre you really going to write more or is this the end? Its...very sad. And I'm sort of surprised no one did anything. Makes me wonder why Sandman couldn't enter through the wards. I really want to know what Jack was feeling when he saw Hermione die and Nix just lose all hope. Did she know Jack was there?
3/10/2017 c7 Siera-Knightwalker
Trust me, I get how annoying it can be. I had no idea people who love writing and literature, in general, could be this bad in grammar. Quite frankly, I hate it but some people write stuff like that by mistake. You need a bit more apathy. Some assholes just don't want to improve.
Trust me, I get how annoying it can be. I had no idea people who love writing and literature, in general, could be this bad in grammar. Quite frankly, I hate it but some people write stuff like that by mistake. You need a bit more apathy. Some assholes just don't want to improve.
7/15/2016 c7 11HoldTightAndPretendItIsAPlan
IT CAN ALSO BE: 'He was seated on a stool.'
And I agree with you, grammar is going down the drain! We need more editors on this site. (Worse than bad grammar is bad spelling. How? HOW?! Autocorrect is a thing people! Just copy-paste into google if you're that desperate!)
11HoldTightAndPretendItIsAPlanIT CAN ALSO BE: 'He was seated on a stool.'
And I agree with you, grammar is going down the drain! We need more editors on this site. (Worse than bad grammar is bad spelling. How? HOW?! Autocorrect is a thing people! Just copy-paste into google if you're that desperate!)
7/10/2016 c2 Guest
i literally cried on this one
i literally cried on this one
7/1/2016 c7 5Extended Experience
But what if you had a sentence like this one: "She looked around at the seating arangement that had been assigned; Julia was placed near the front, and Johnathon was sat in the back."
5Extended ExperienceBut what if you had a sentence like this one: "She looked around at the seating arangement that had been assigned; Julia was placed near the front, and Johnathon was sat in the back."
6/29/2016 c7 2Rinnala
I'm really looking forward to the rewrite of this story if it means you will continue it. I'm not quite sure why you rant about grammar, but I can see what you mean. It is annoying. I do have one tentative question though. You say never and I just thought I knew there was an exception to the rule, but maybe you could tell me with certainty.
Would 'he was sat on a stool by his mother' be correct in the scenario of a mother picking up and placing a child on a stool? I know it's definitely correct to replace 'was' with 'had been', but would it be downright wrong to use 'was'?
2RinnalaI'm really looking forward to the rewrite of this story if it means you will continue it. I'm not quite sure why you rant about grammar, but I can see what you mean. It is annoying. I do have one tentative question though. You say never and I just thought I knew there was an exception to the rule, but maybe you could tell me with certainty.
Would 'he was sat on a stool by his mother' be correct in the scenario of a mother picking up and placing a child on a stool? I know it's definitely correct to replace 'was' with 'had been', but would it be downright wrong to use 'was'?
