8/18/2015 c10 Hannah
I LOVE LYRA

12/25/2014 c3 SilverSapphire34523
"Kurapika, you have a cute girlfriend "
I was laughing so hard at that line

12/26/2013 c1 Guest
Hi Leanne!
Eventhough you said that English isnt your Language, I found that your English is quite good :D To be honest with ya, I think your English is better than my English xD Though there are quite some Grammar mistakes, I believe you can improve and finally, in the end, you will have no grammar mistakes at all :) Well, lemme give you a few tips:
1) Idk if you got re-read your stories or not, you should read them and then think if the sentences, or whatsoever sound right or not :)
2) Read more books (that interest you) and some other people's stories/fanfic :) I recommend you, The Lost Night ( by Lyra Klaude ), its HxH but KilluaXOc :D
3) When you wanna write a new chapters and all, you must have some words that you dont know how to spell or not sure it is correct, You should go to Google, example, you are not sure how to spell 'Language' (Well judging from the mistake you made on your Author Note's on top xD), you should try to type something that is similar to the tone of 'Language', for example, you type 'Leaguage' (you can press enter if you want), Im sure that Google will provide you the answer and correct your spelling of how to spell Language ;)
I hope that this will help you :D, I dont usually give reviews because I only enjoy reading them xD But since you said give advice about your Grammar and Vocabulary in reviews.. I can only give you the Grammar :P Because I suck at Vocab . Plus im just in Grade 6th (Some other countries) /Primary 6 (In Singapore, Idk bout other countries using Primary..), So I still have a long way to go T.T And im confident that you will improve in you English :D Thanks for your Chapters :) I just finished reading chapter 2, so Idk why but I came back to chapter 1 to give you some advices :)

5/14/2013 c10 3LordOfTheWest
This is very interesting! I like your OC which is rare for me as I am very Very picky when reading stuff with an OC in it. She seems to fit in the group, not be the main center of attention, and I like that Please update soon! I wish to see more of the development of Lyra and also the development between Kurapika an Lyra.

5/7/2013 c3 Nispedana
*looks at your reply on the latest chapter* In the previous chapter, you see, you use - instead of " and other issues like that. I'm glad you changed it up for this chapter though so it was easier to understand.
I also looked at the review this chapter which is yours. You shouldn't put A/Ns in reviews esp. if it contains messages that you're too lazy to edit. xD What will you do if we say 'so many mistakes, too lazy to read.', huh? haha. Of course, I'm managing to read through so far but a few others may not-so be warned! Besides, it's too early to say. Who knows right? You may find the time to revamp using the EXP feature of the site.

5/2/2013 c9 Angelic Fluffle
Waa! This is really good. You don't destroy the storyline, but you mix Lyra in realistically.
Fluffle out!
(Typing one fingered is really hard!)

4/22/2013 c9 tifa2001
Please update as soon as you can I love this fanfic so much! I also want to see who lyra fights cause I have not seen her fight that much.