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2Godfrey Phoenix
I got hooked with Ahh! My Goddess for so long and so happy to bumped into your story while doing my srarches for related topics about this anime/manga. I think most of us would wish for a goddess like Belldandy and wanted this kind of ending for the two lovers. This is just so AMAZING! I wish that the series has been like this where Keiichi and Belldandy take their"relationship" in a whole new level. I like the overall story, gets your imagination going _ keep it up and thank you!
2Godfrey PhoenixI got hooked with Ahh! My Goddess for so long and so happy to bumped into your story while doing my srarches for related topics about this anime/manga. I think most of us would wish for a goddess like Belldandy and wanted this kind of ending for the two lovers. This is just so AMAZING! I wish that the series has been like this where Keiichi and Belldandy take their"relationship" in a whole new level. I like the overall story, gets your imagination going _ keep it up and thank you!
9/11/2018 c10 Ninjpn6
This is like the ending we never got from the original series. That being said you did an amazing job writing a great aftermath to it. This was truly a satisfying ending. Keep up the great work!
This is like the ending we never got from the original series. That being said you did an amazing job writing a great aftermath to it. This was truly a satisfying ending. Keep up the great work!
1/24/2018 c9 jerfome renner
thank you for spilling the writing, good form, the two part was a very good thing and no back ground to overload the reader A very good read, keep it UP
WELL DON
thank you for spilling the writing, good form, the two part was a very good thing and no back ground to overload the reader A very good read, keep it UP
WELL DON
1/24/2018 c6 jerome b renner
1 you do have the good fell for the people in the story. I think the set up was spot on,
2 you take the time to get it right, NEVER RUSH the is a good way to run the project I DID THAT after 62 years you think I would get it right-noway
3 Please enjoy this hobby I know you can be a wordsmith one day.
Good luck
1 you do have the good fell for the people in the story. I think the set up was spot on,
2 you take the time to get it right, NEVER RUSH the is a good way to run the project I DID THAT after 62 years you think I would get it right-noway
3 Please enjoy this hobby I know you can be a wordsmith one day.
Good luck
12/24/2017 c11 2bk201fan
Pretty good heart warming story. Only complain is that some details were mentioned multiple times and Kei and Bell dialog was pretty generic. Other than that it was a joy to read and it had a very nice ending.
2bk201fanPretty good heart warming story. Only complain is that some details were mentioned multiple times and Kei and Bell dialog was pretty generic. Other than that it was a joy to read and it had a very nice ending.
8/26/2017 c11 patt2521
It gave me the feels! BEST fanfic ever!
It gave me the feels! BEST fanfic ever!
7/26/2017 c8 N.S
Sorry, for not commenting sooner! I'm reading this this year while it was already written pretty long ago. Anyways, I think that this is an amazing story. I wouldn't change anything. keep writing , man
Sorry, for not commenting sooner! I'm reading this this year while it was already written pretty long ago. Anyways, I think that this is an amazing story. I wouldn't change anything. keep writing , man
6/22/2017 c6 Guest
Actually in the series her father is supposed to be Tyr, one of Odin's sons who is apparently the chief god in one Norse myth.
Actually in the series her father is supposed to be Tyr, one of Odin's sons who is apparently the chief god in one Norse myth.
5/20/2017 c5 Guest
great story
great story
1/9/2017 c11 jerome b renner
you did a GREAT job on the story just the right hook at the end of each chapter an a last KEEP ON WRITING! The story is good as far as you have taken it. I can see that will be a word smith and writer. But you are not there yet! My dear gamera I am looking for you next story. And yes you did stayed true to his story the original.
you did a GREAT job on the story just the right hook at the end of each chapter an a last KEEP ON WRITING! The story is good as far as you have taken it. I can see that will be a word smith and writer. But you are not there yet! My dear gamera I am looking for you next story. And yes you did stayed true to his story the original.
12/1/2016 c1 Guest
dear writer please keep this up you did a great job. the flashback was a good for the story.
dear writer please keep this up you did a great job. the flashback was a good for the story.
6/26/2016 c1 Austin
I appreciate all the work you put into this. And parts of it felt very real. But to much of it felt like things that wouldn't happen. And some of the things they said didn't seem like the things they would say. Sorry, I don't mean to critique or anything. I guess we all just have our perfect image of the two. Especially as I have been watching anime for about 20 years now and they are my favorite couple of all time. So please don't take anything I said harshly. I did enjoy reading this, so thank you for sharing it.
I appreciate all the work you put into this. And parts of it felt very real. But to much of it felt like things that wouldn't happen. And some of the things they said didn't seem like the things they would say. Sorry, I don't mean to critique or anything. I guess we all just have our perfect image of the two. Especially as I have been watching anime for about 20 years now and they are my favorite couple of all time. So please don't take anything I said harshly. I did enjoy reading this, so thank you for sharing it.
4/19/2015 c11 1Ultimate10
I just started getting into Ah! My Goddess and I like it a lot! It's awesome to see ur writing stories for it like RV. Thank you for writing this. I'll continue to read ur latest Xover with RV and AMG,
1Ultimate10I just started getting into Ah! My Goddess and I like it a lot! It's awesome to see ur writing stories for it like RV. Thank you for writing this. I'll continue to read ur latest Xover with RV and AMG,
2/24/2015 c10 Lamonar
This is one of the best fanfiction i read abt this anime so far. Keep up the good work!
This is one of the best fanfiction i read abt this anime so far. Keep up the good work!
9/8/2014 c11 Guest
This was a pretty good read, but to be honest, you seem to still be a novice writer. A lot of your writing blatantly points out details as facts rather than explaining them. I think when you go into detail about what is going on around the character or what the characters are wearing, you could flesh it out a bit more, give the readers a good clear picture of what your trying to describe.
Also, the love scene was not bad, but not good either. Should you decide to write another story with anything sexual, again flesh it out, make it a bit longer and show the true love and emotion that goes into it. Sex without emotion is good and all, but in a story like this one, where two characters are so completely in love with each other, Its best to show how that love progressed to that point and when they finally make that big step, show the complete devotion they have toward each other and really bring out that loving romantic atmosphere.
Other than that, this was a surprisingly good read and I rather enjoyed it.
This was a pretty good read, but to be honest, you seem to still be a novice writer. A lot of your writing blatantly points out details as facts rather than explaining them. I think when you go into detail about what is going on around the character or what the characters are wearing, you could flesh it out a bit more, give the readers a good clear picture of what your trying to describe.
Also, the love scene was not bad, but not good either. Should you decide to write another story with anything sexual, again flesh it out, make it a bit longer and show the true love and emotion that goes into it. Sex without emotion is good and all, but in a story like this one, where two characters are so completely in love with each other, Its best to show how that love progressed to that point and when they finally make that big step, show the complete devotion they have toward each other and really bring out that loving romantic atmosphere.
Other than that, this was a surprisingly good read and I rather enjoyed it.
