for Rock and Stripes8/27/2015 c12
22Night Fury Warrior
This is actually really cool! Wish you'd continue it though, seems most of the good fics on this site don't always get finished. (I guess I can't say much XD)
-Minecast Chris
22Night Fury WarriorThis is actually really cool! Wish you'd continue it though, seems most of the good fics on this site don't always get finished. (I guess I can't say much XD)
-Minecast Chris
7/14/2015 c12 Guest
This is awesome! Loved it!
This is awesome! Loved it!
12/29/2012 c12 Razel-Treasure
Freakin' awesome fanfic. I love this. Though you have to check for (very) few grammar corrections. But nonetheless, I love this, I am looking forward to new chapter! Happy New Year!
Freakin' awesome fanfic. I love this. Though you have to check for (very) few grammar corrections. But nonetheless, I love this, I am looking forward to new chapter! Happy New Year!
6/13/2012 c10
3indefinity007
Nice story. Great plot. Awesome storytelling. Just what the doctor ordered.
3indefinity007Nice story. Great plot. Awesome storytelling. Just what the doctor ordered.
5/21/2012 c9
12Valisco
Hey StarCaptain! Nice 4 chapters that I had to catchup on reading for this fic so far! I wanted to review last night, but I fell asleep after reading this quite late at night, lol! Sorry I did not review these chapters earlier, school is stressing me out with these exams and still are, and it won't end unti late June. But I still haven't forgotten this story and other fics I am reading. Keep up the great work!
I also like your OC Yuuka, she's such an interesting character, and her reasons for world domination are quite intriguing. However, in a way, she reminds me of Ram from the BRS manga, Innocent Soul. I mean both think the people of their kind are weak and useless. And your reasons for picking the Cap to cross over with BRS are excellent and readonable. Rock's gonna learn a lot from Steve.
Some criticism though, you have a great style of writing, but you need to be consisitent with your tenses, you tend to switch a lot between past and present. Also some spelling errors are seen.
Other than that, continue more of this awesome work! :)
12ValiscoHey StarCaptain! Nice 4 chapters that I had to catchup on reading for this fic so far! I wanted to review last night, but I fell asleep after reading this quite late at night, lol! Sorry I did not review these chapters earlier, school is stressing me out with these exams and still are, and it won't end unti late June. But I still haven't forgotten this story and other fics I am reading. Keep up the great work!
I also like your OC Yuuka, she's such an interesting character, and her reasons for world domination are quite intriguing. However, in a way, she reminds me of Ram from the BRS manga, Innocent Soul. I mean both think the people of their kind are weak and useless. And your reasons for picking the Cap to cross over with BRS are excellent and readonable. Rock's gonna learn a lot from Steve.
Some criticism though, you have a great style of writing, but you need to be consisitent with your tenses, you tend to switch a lot between past and present. Also some spelling errors are seen.
Other than that, continue more of this awesome work! :)
4/20/2012 c7
2Hanana Bread
I like your story so far. I hope your updates continue to flow weekly. Your writing style is good.
Please update soon,
:D
2Hanana BreadI like your story so far. I hope your updates continue to flow weekly. Your writing style is good.
Please update soon,
:D
3/17/2012 c5
12Valisco
Huh I like this story so far! :) It's quite interesting, although it might take me a while to get used to your characterization of BRS & the otherworlders for this fic such as them talking, because they are usually so mute and do not really desplay emotion, lol. But hey, this is your fic, you control it. I await for more!
12ValiscoHuh I like this story so far! :) It's quite interesting, although it might take me a while to get used to your characterization of BRS & the otherworlders for this fic such as them talking, because they are usually so mute and do not really desplay emotion, lol. But hey, this is your fic, you control it. I await for more!
3/12/2012 c4
2Mister House
Thanks for the tribute, it really means a lot! :)
I've been keeping up-to-date on this story and it's amazing. I like Marvel and any comics or movies released by them. Seeing how Captain America and B RS are going to interact with each other will be amazing to read. Keep up the good work, as it has the fine makings of becoming an enjoyable fic (I didn't type in "great" as there will be people who will think otherwise, but as long as you know it's a great fic and devote yourself to it, then there is no problem). Got it in my faves and I'm subscribing it in my alerts!
~TrailblazingArtist
2Mister HouseThanks for the tribute, it really means a lot! :)
I've been keeping up-to-date on this story and it's amazing. I like Marvel and any comics or movies released by them. Seeing how Captain America and B RS are going to interact with each other will be amazing to read. Keep up the good work, as it has the fine makings of becoming an enjoyable fic (I didn't type in "great" as there will be people who will think otherwise, but as long as you know it's a great fic and devote yourself to it, then there is no problem). Got it in my faves and I'm subscribing it in my alerts!
~TrailblazingArtist
