for Vertibird East7/31/2019 c8 A human
8 years old and this fic still holds up.
8 years old and this fic still holds up.
7/6/2015 c8 Fives32
Upon review, this story has a one-dimensional and overall static, underperforming plot.
Upon review, this story has a one-dimensional and overall static, underperforming plot.
4/7/2013 c7 AnthonyR89
fairly interesting story, though the fight between butch and the talon company merc was boring. you also referred to anna holt as janice, several times. and there've been some more spelling errors, you really need to get a proofreader to comb over your work. you also overdid the scenes about dogmeat.
fairly interesting story, though the fight between butch and the talon company merc was boring. you also referred to anna holt as janice, several times. and there've been some more spelling errors, you really need to get a proofreader to comb over your work. you also overdid the scenes about dogmeat.
4/7/2013 c2 AnthonyR89
interesting beginning. one thing though, you repeatedly use "sense" when you should be using "since". you also used "ignorant", instead of "ignored".
interesting beginning. one thing though, you repeatedly use "sense" when you should be using "since". you also used "ignorant", instead of "ignored".
9/14/2011 c8 geraldford
:( i wanted to see this story continue could you have a sequal with something cool idk msg me if you want ideas or chec some of my stories i have never had the time to continue them and have several different story plots ready for those who have the time and well motivation to finnish them check out my first one with like 10+ chapters
:( i wanted to see this story continue could you have a sequal with something cool idk msg me if you want ideas or chec some of my stories i have never had the time to continue them and have several different story plots ready for those who have the time and well motivation to finnish them check out my first one with like 10+ chapters
9/8/2011 c7 geraldford
nooooooooooooooooooooooooo i want to see more like for one who is jacks wife also can you have a few chapters about how the remmenant build grayditch into soemthing thenhave the legion come over and fsu so then they save alot of people and just some cool stuff and have morneo become less anti brotherhood and get their armor and vertibird back :( pleaseeeee!
nooooooooooooooooooooooooo i want to see more like for one who is jacks wife also can you have a few chapters about how the remmenant build grayditch into soemthing thenhave the legion come over and fsu so then they save alot of people and just some cool stuff and have morneo become less anti brotherhood and get their armor and vertibird back :( pleaseeeee!
9/8/2011 c7 
6A Dozen Lemmings
So I'm under the impression based on this Chapter that this ties into Journeys which I dearly hope you continue.
The Bit with Dog meat moves a little awkwardly but other than that Very well done chapter.
6A Dozen LemmingsSo I'm under the impression based on this Chapter that this ties into Journeys which I dearly hope you continue.
The Bit with Dog meat moves a little awkwardly but other than that Very well done chapter.
8/12/2011 c4 4Big boss's perfect clone
I've been enjoying the story so far, and I appreciate the (largely) accurate portrayals of each Enclave Remnant. However, I do have a few minor gripes with the story. There was pretty much no way that Arcade could've stood up to a blow from a power fist to the head (I'll let that go, however). My only real critique is that I recommend you work on your spelling and grammar, as I've noticed throughout the story are a rather large number of errors on both accounts. Still, keep up the good work, as you've churned out a good story so far.
4Big boss's perfect cloneI've been enjoying the story so far, and I appreciate the (largely) accurate portrayals of each Enclave Remnant. However, I do have a few minor gripes with the story. There was pretty much no way that Arcade could've stood up to a blow from a power fist to the head (I'll let that go, however). My only real critique is that I recommend you work on your spelling and grammar, as I've noticed throughout the story are a rather large number of errors on both accounts. Still, keep up the good work, as you've churned out a good story so far.
7/31/2011 c4 2Char Osborn
Okay I was skeptical at first because your mixing two story lines here, but I think its well done, definitely work on it more, and I would love to see a possible part where they start heading westward with Jack and some bos. Kudos on the comedy too
2Char OsbornOkay I was skeptical at first because your mixing two story lines here, but I think its well done, definitely work on it more, and I would love to see a possible part where they start heading westward with Jack and some bos. Kudos on the comedy too
7/31/2011 c4 Char Osborn
Okay I was skeptical at first because your mixing two story lines here, but I think its well done, definitely work on it more, and I would love to see a possible part where they start heading westward with Jack and some bos. Kudos on the comedy too
Okay I was skeptical at first because your mixing two story lines here, but I think its well done, definitely work on it more, and I would love to see a possible part where they start heading westward with Jack and some bos. Kudos on the comedy too
