for Well This is Unexpected11/2/2016 c1 GLB
Please Continue. :)
Please Continue. :)
1/4/2015 c1 Guest
Loved your story!
Loved your story!
7/25/2011 c1 
2Irina Richmond
I love it, I hope they have a future together for a long time (and possibly, with children). But I have a question: instead of "her" (Saya) you replace it with "you" (the reader-who is hopefully female), why is that? And about this version of Saya, she seems too approaching, I mean when she met Solomon, she was a shy and sort of clumsy girl (innocence is a very beautiful factor). Other than those two factors, the story is good. Thumbs up :)
2Irina RichmondI love it, I hope they have a future together for a long time (and possibly, with children). But I have a question: instead of "her" (Saya) you replace it with "you" (the reader-who is hopefully female), why is that? And about this version of Saya, she seems too approaching, I mean when she met Solomon, she was a shy and sort of clumsy girl (innocence is a very beautiful factor). Other than those two factors, the story is good. Thumbs up :)
