for Fairyride4/5 c20 Guest
I hope you're doing okay with your family! I've been rereading this fic every year since you started and I absolutely adore it! I hope you'll update one day, but I understand that a lot can happen in 6 years. Please be okay!
I hope you're doing okay with your family! I've been rereading this fic every year since you started and I absolutely adore it! I hope you'll update one day, but I understand that a lot can happen in 6 years. Please be okay!
3/1/2017 c20 JeaNii08
First off, my condolences to you and your family. I hope you guys overcome this tragic hardship. Secondly I really love your story so far. And I'm all team Kizuo (Kumiko/Shizuo) instead of Kuzaya (Kumiko/Izaya) I hope you come back to this story soon
First off, my condolences to you and your family. I hope you guys overcome this tragic hardship. Secondly I really love your story so far. And I'm all team Kizuo (Kumiko/Shizuo) instead of Kuzaya (Kumiko/Izaya) I hope you come back to this story soon
10/30/2016 c20 Silent Killing
Can't wait for Izaya's 'feelings' to be triggered! :D
Hope that you're okay and that you'll update soon!
Can't wait for Izaya's 'feelings' to be triggered! :D
Hope that you're okay and that you'll update soon!
8/23/2016 c19 Guest
I love your story so much! Ur really great at writing the characters! Keep up the good !
I love your story so much! Ur really great at writing the characters! Keep up the good !
6/30/2016 c12 LOLWUT
This chapter made me blush like a motherfucker
This chapter made me blush like a motherfucker
5/28/2016 c20 Tuna
I love this story! Seriously, I love how different your OC is.
I think Kumiko would have an easier relationship with Shizuo, but I can see a relationship with Izaya working out...It would just be a lot more hazardous and would take longer to develop. Maybe I prefer her being with Izaya because of my own Izaya bias :'D And I remember reading a good blog post which speculated on whether Izaya could romantically love an individual, and I thought it brought up some good points: post/138515953085/durararaizaya-analysismeta
Anyways, I hope you can update sometime, especially seen as the Izaya arc was starting :)
I love this story! Seriously, I love how different your OC is.
I think Kumiko would have an easier relationship with Shizuo, but I can see a relationship with Izaya working out...It would just be a lot more hazardous and would take longer to develop. Maybe I prefer her being with Izaya because of my own Izaya bias :'D And I remember reading a good blog post which speculated on whether Izaya could romantically love an individual, and I thought it brought up some good points: post/138515953085/durararaizaya-analysismeta
Anyways, I hope you can update sometime, especially seen as the Izaya arc was starting :)
122/18/2016 c20 Lady Syndra
I think I shall have to wait and read more before deciding who to ship her with. However I am currently leaning towards Kumiko and Shizuo. They just fit a lot better and they're much sweeter!
I think I shall have to wait and read more before deciding who to ship her with. However I am currently leaning towards Kumiko and Shizuo. They just fit a lot better and they're much sweeter!
12/27/2015 c15 White-Nostalgia
I enjoyed the story so far. Kumiko, I will admit, annoyed me quite a bit at first. She still annoys me a little but there is still something likeable about her. What I find annoying about her is that she seems to be incompetent at everything. It's perfectly realistic to have a flaws like insecurity, shyness but it's also frustrating because I don't feel her character has changed much. I haven't finished the whole story of course so we will see how this goes.
From what I've read so far, Kumiko is definitely a better match for Shizuo. Izaya is my favourite character but I struggle to see him considering someone as submissive and average as Kumiko as an equal. There is nothing wrong with being average - it's just that she is the type of person who Izaya sees every day and it's the insecure girls that he takes advantage of and uses. Any relationship between Izaya and Kumiko would jsut be really unhealthy and become a parent-child relationship.
Anyway I haven't read the entire thing yet so ignore this review entirely if it isn't relevant later on. I also see you haven't updated in a while which si a shame. I hope you return to this story soon.
White-Nostalgia
I enjoyed the story so far. Kumiko, I will admit, annoyed me quite a bit at first. She still annoys me a little but there is still something likeable about her. What I find annoying about her is that she seems to be incompetent at everything. It's perfectly realistic to have a flaws like insecurity, shyness but it's also frustrating because I don't feel her character has changed much. I haven't finished the whole story of course so we will see how this goes.
From what I've read so far, Kumiko is definitely a better match for Shizuo. Izaya is my favourite character but I struggle to see him considering someone as submissive and average as Kumiko as an equal. There is nothing wrong with being average - it's just that she is the type of person who Izaya sees every day and it's the insecure girls that he takes advantage of and uses. Any relationship between Izaya and Kumiko would jsut be really unhealthy and become a parent-child relationship.
Anyway I haven't read the entire thing yet so ignore this review entirely if it isn't relevant later on. I also see you haven't updated in a while which si a shame. I hope you return to this story soon.
White-Nostalgia
7/19/2015 c6 Doshy
I really like the story so far! ( am only on ch6 though hahaha) But one thing that kinda annoys me atm is some of the language used. I have no problems with swear words, i use them way too mich aswell, but 'faggit', which is obviously meant to be read as faggot, is maybe a bit too far, espicially as it is a slur and not to be used as an insult. Bipolar is also not really appropriate as an adjective, as it is a mental illness, not a charactistic. I know a probably come off as whiny but as someone who is gay, faggot can be very offensive. I guess these issues may be adressed in the chapters i have not read, but im just voicing my opinions.
I really like the story so far! ( am only on ch6 though hahaha) But one thing that kinda annoys me atm is some of the language used. I have no problems with swear words, i use them way too mich aswell, but 'faggit', which is obviously meant to be read as faggot, is maybe a bit too far, espicially as it is a slur and not to be used as an insult. Bipolar is also not really appropriate as an adjective, as it is a mental illness, not a charactistic. I know a probably come off as whiny but as someone who is gay, faggot can be very offensive. I guess these issues may be adressed in the chapters i have not read, but im just voicing my opinions.
7/18/2015 c20 Bloody.Kirai
Soooo... Haven't updated, I see... Please help me satisfy my Shizuo-fangirling :v Please.
Soooo... Haven't updated, I see... Please help me satisfy my Shizuo-fangirling :v Please.
7/18/2015 c11 Bloody.Kirai
This is the second time I read this and I've realized something... She's 14? I mean... didn't you say she was a senior? This might be something you mentioned in an author's note, which I sometimes [ok, a lot of times] skip... Is it?
This is the second time I read this and I've realized something... She's 14? I mean... didn't you say she was a senior? This might be something you mentioned in an author's note, which I sometimes [ok, a lot of times] skip... Is it?
