for Child of Mine5/25 c17 waternixie101gmail.com
just found this and i absolutely love it, there was several places that i laughed so hard i had to walk away just to calm down so i could continue reading. i hope that you eventually finish this i would love to see how it ends
just found this and i absolutely love it, there was several places that i laughed so hard i had to walk away just to calm down so i could continue reading. i hope that you eventually finish this i would love to see how it ends
4/10 c17 Guest
Hey this is really good. Keep up the good work! please update soon.
Hey this is really good. Keep up the good work! please update soon.
4/24/2019 c17 Guest
Hello:
Idk if you're continuing to write your child of mine fanfic, but I must say: u r doing a fantastic job with the storyline and your writing in general. U r WAY better than I ever hope to beat writing but i do have a little idea for the next chapter if you're ok with me intervening. I think u should build on the idea of Harry being powerful. That big 'kitty' (in blank on his name, appologies) he stumbled across in the forbidden forest got a little picture of that power. But I think it'd be cool to write the story as if Harry has no idea that he's that powerful and have the dark lord be quite baffled by his power and have a bit of a difficult time controlling Harry but is able to do it in the end. U can also have some of the death eaters help control him. Such as bellatrix or Lucius. Idk if u want them to be a little bit soft towards Harry or not, but based on some of them other hp fanfics that I have previously read the story is better if u make the dark lord unloving and very cruel like he is in the books.
But I haven't figured out how Snape and the other good guys will figure out were Harry is.
Whatever u write, remember: in a book, ANYthing can happen.
I look forward to your next chapter and hope that this can be helpful to u.
Hello:
Idk if you're continuing to write your child of mine fanfic, but I must say: u r doing a fantastic job with the storyline and your writing in general. U r WAY better than I ever hope to beat writing but i do have a little idea for the next chapter if you're ok with me intervening. I think u should build on the idea of Harry being powerful. That big 'kitty' (in blank on his name, appologies) he stumbled across in the forbidden forest got a little picture of that power. But I think it'd be cool to write the story as if Harry has no idea that he's that powerful and have the dark lord be quite baffled by his power and have a bit of a difficult time controlling Harry but is able to do it in the end. U can also have some of the death eaters help control him. Such as bellatrix or Lucius. Idk if u want them to be a little bit soft towards Harry or not, but based on some of them other hp fanfics that I have previously read the story is better if u make the dark lord unloving and very cruel like he is in the books.
But I haven't figured out how Snape and the other good guys will figure out were Harry is.
Whatever u write, remember: in a book, ANYthing can happen.
I look forward to your next chapter and hope that this can be helpful to u.
2/25/2019 c1 Guest
I LOVED the idea of the story! I was just thinking that maybe you could end the sentences in some places, because they end up getting too long. Also, maybe think bout correcting some grammar? I work for a publishing agency, and think there could be some more spirit. That’s all I have! Thank you for this delightful story.
I LOVED the idea of the story! I was just thinking that maybe you could end the sentences in some places, because they end up getting too long. Also, maybe think bout correcting some grammar? I work for a publishing agency, and think there could be some more spirit. That’s all I have! Thank you for this delightful story.
2/10/2019 c17 moonprincess97524
I love this wonderful wonderful story that you have written so far. I love how everyone explains to Harry about how things are for Snape and how he doesn't understand things and such. I really love that Harry was able to get Moony to change into a girl via prank and act like he didn't do it intentionaly. I look forward to more of this wonderful story as soon as you are able to update it.
I love this wonderful wonderful story that you have written so far. I love how everyone explains to Harry about how things are for Snape and how he doesn't understand things and such. I really love that Harry was able to get Moony to change into a girl via prank and act like he didn't do it intentionaly. I look forward to more of this wonderful story as soon as you are able to update it.
10/7/2018 c17 mumphie
Really quite a cliffhanger! Twelve years have gone by, and you said that your wouldn't abandon this story. Perhaps looking for your muse behind the curtains? Itis an interesting take and flows well. Please consider coming back!
Really quite a cliffhanger! Twelve years have gone by, and you said that your wouldn't abandon this story. Perhaps looking for your muse behind the curtains? Itis an interesting take and flows well. Please consider coming back!
8/29/2018 c17 tmntfanforever852
Love the story only site that's allows to type emails are archive of our own and wattpad
Love the story only site that's allows to type emails are archive of our own and wattpad
6/19/2018 c17 
2TinkaPrime
It comes down to privacy issues and virus complaints when people email from links.
2TinkaPrimeIt comes down to privacy issues and virus complaints when people email from links.
