for Baked Hearts8/10/2011 c1 
1NatashaKirsty
Loving your story so far
i've read both chapters and your story has gotten me interested in hearing more of your ideas towards this story.
hope to see more chapters written for it n completed so i can read all over again
excellent job :)
1NatashaKirstyLoving your story so far
i've read both chapters and your story has gotten me interested in hearing more of your ideas towards this story.
hope to see more chapters written for it n completed so i can read all over again
excellent job :)
4/3/2011 c2 27LowFlyer1080
Off to a good start. Don't let up now! It's getting interesting!
Write from the heart.
-LF1080
27LowFlyer1080Off to a good start. Don't let up now! It's getting interesting!
Write from the heart.
-LF1080
11/10/2010 c2 Daysimay
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You son of a ^%$&^%!
I was having fun reading!
Why must you tease me in such a way!
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You son of a ^%$&^%!
I was having fun reading!
Why must you tease me in such a way!
9/8/2010 c2 Guest
please please please PLEASE! update soon i really love this fic i know i shouldn't rush artists but i just have to know the rest =^-^=
please please please PLEASE! update soon i really love this fic i know i shouldn't rush artists but i just have to know the rest =^-^=
9/6/2010 c2 ritsuMonkey7
You've attracted the attention of another person right here. So keep up the good work because I can't wait for another chapter soon!
You've attracted the attention of another person right here. So keep up the good work because I can't wait for another chapter soon!
5/13/2010 c2 2Sherin
I think I saw that fanart. Was it the one which has Chikane wearing an apron while holding a tray of breads and other kind of breads lying in front of her?
2SherinI think I saw that fanart. Was it the one which has Chikane wearing an apron while holding a tray of breads and other kind of breads lying in front of her?
5/10/2010 c2 devilhamster
wow, this was awesome. Man i cant wait for the next chapter. thanks ... ^^
wow, this was awesome. Man i cant wait for the next chapter. thanks ... ^^
4/20/2010 c2 191DezoPenguin
Well, not a bad start at all! (And if the piece of fanart that inspired you to write this story is the one I'm thinking of-"Himemiya Bakery" by nitro7-then I can definitely see how it would inspire you to write!) I'm rather fond of the peaceful mood thus far, comparable in its way to "Aria," though I have no idea if you're going to keep that as things go on. It fits well, though, given that Chikane operates a bakery instead of being a demon-fighting miko! There are a few places where the word choice is a little rough or punctuation could be buffed up, but relatively few of them. I'm looking forward to more.
191DezoPenguinWell, not a bad start at all! (And if the piece of fanart that inspired you to write this story is the one I'm thinking of-"Himemiya Bakery" by nitro7-then I can definitely see how it would inspire you to write!) I'm rather fond of the peaceful mood thus far, comparable in its way to "Aria," though I have no idea if you're going to keep that as things go on. It fits well, though, given that Chikane operates a bakery instead of being a demon-fighting miko! There are a few places where the word choice is a little rough or punctuation could be buffed up, but relatively few of them. I'm looking forward to more.
4/1/2010 c2 283Major Mike Powell III
Well, well, soldier...
This is interesting.
Like others have said before me: beautiful writing and descriptions. Himeko and Chikane sound B-E-A-Utiful. :D
And leave it to Himeko to get excited 'bout a bakery. LOL
Now, this was some 2ยบ meeting. LMAO Himeko is SO shy! She's A-D-O-Rable! =W= And Chikane, as cool as ever. Nice!
So, let's see what the Himemiya Bakery is all about!
Mission start!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
283Major Mike Powell IIIWell, well, soldier...
This is interesting.
Like others have said before me: beautiful writing and descriptions. Himeko and Chikane sound B-E-A-Utiful. :D
And leave it to Himeko to get excited 'bout a bakery. LOL
Now, this was some 2ยบ meeting. LMAO Himeko is SO shy! She's A-D-O-Rable! =W= And Chikane, as cool as ever. Nice!
So, let's see what the Himemiya Bakery is all about!
Mission start!
Update ASAP! That's an order!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
