for The Police of Forks Has My Heart4/5/2014 c22 
1Just.Kez
i re-read this story a lot and i always forget the ending! so sad! so well written though xxx
1Just.Kezi re-read this story a lot and i always forget the ending! so sad! so well written though xxx
3/5/2013 c22 gatorgrl91
Wow! I'm not sure what to say. I certainly didn't c that coming! *Character Death* should b a warning.
Wow! I'm not sure what to say. I certainly didn't c that coming! *Character Death* should b a warning.
3/5/2013 c12 gatorgrl91
Ok...I'm lost. Quite a big jump in the relationship between Bella & Edward in this chap & I don't see a connection? I know the meadow talk brought Edward into Bella's reality & opened him up but to go from that to breakfast where everyone allowed Esme to speak to her so rudely-including her "best friend" Alice, to him kissing her on the cheek? I can sorta see Bella getting upset about getting reassigned bc everything in her life as she knows it is changing, but their closeness is coming about with seemingly no transition.
Questions:
*How is it that Charlie was the chief of police, murdered on the job, Edward's a police officer & became one because of Charlie, and yet didn't know/remember that major detail?
*Am I the only one who's noticed a) Bella hasn't eaten in days and b) hasn't changed out of her bloodied clothes-much less had a shower.
On separate note, it truly is a tragic situation Bella is in!
Ok...I'm lost. Quite a big jump in the relationship between Bella & Edward in this chap & I don't see a connection? I know the meadow talk brought Edward into Bella's reality & opened him up but to go from that to breakfast where everyone allowed Esme to speak to her so rudely-including her "best friend" Alice, to him kissing her on the cheek? I can sorta see Bella getting upset about getting reassigned bc everything in her life as she knows it is changing, but their closeness is coming about with seemingly no transition.
Questions:
*How is it that Charlie was the chief of police, murdered on the job, Edward's a police officer & became one because of Charlie, and yet didn't know/remember that major detail?
*Am I the only one who's noticed a) Bella hasn't eaten in days and b) hasn't changed out of her bloodied clothes-much less had a shower.
On separate note, it truly is a tragic situation Bella is in!
1/4/2013 c10 magmom2
This day was had been? What is that. Now that you have that amazing Beta I suggest you both try spell-check. Oh and Duh. James.
This day was had been? What is that. Now that you have that amazing Beta I suggest you both try spell-check. Oh and Duh. James.
10/26/2012 c22 spartangirl03
I actually understood the ending , there so many stories I read and say why is there a hea when obviously he didn't deserve her ... So I kind of like what you did , so everyone can learn from it like you said .
I actually understood the ending , there so many stories I read and say why is there a hea when obviously he didn't deserve her ... So I kind of like what you did , so everyone can learn from it like you said .
5/21/2012 c23 3lionandthelamblove7
I am glad that you decided to end the story the way you did. I will be the first to admit that it is indeed a sad ending, but at the same time it is also beautiful. I loved it. I read the love that Bella was able to give to someone that was not blood and she had a big heart and wasn't what everyone thought of her. I don't think that the story would of had such an effect if she were to not pass. I loved this story and no matter what was said by anyone else it was truly amazing and had me in tears and I felt my heart hurting for Bella. Loved it and thank you for writing it.
-lionandthelamblove7
3lionandthelamblove7I am glad that you decided to end the story the way you did. I will be the first to admit that it is indeed a sad ending, but at the same time it is also beautiful. I loved it. I read the love that Bella was able to give to someone that was not blood and she had a big heart and wasn't what everyone thought of her. I don't think that the story would of had such an effect if she were to not pass. I loved this story and no matter what was said by anyone else it was truly amazing and had me in tears and I felt my heart hurting for Bella. Loved it and thank you for writing it.
-lionandthelamblove7
5/10/2012 c1 RobsHoor
I'm glad I read the reviews before I got invested in this fic. I was actually looking forward to reading it after seeing the summary. But I'm a HEA girl and I can live with character deaths as long as it's not Edward or Bella.
I'm glad I read the reviews before I got invested in this fic. I was actually looking forward to reading it after seeing the summary. But I'm a HEA girl and I can live with character deaths as long as it's not Edward or Bella.
12/19/2011 c23 1Molly May Pinky
Just read this story & wow ... all I can say is OMG.
You killed her off ...OMFG.
LOL
I can't believe you did that, here I was waiting for the HEA & wham ... holly cow, you have just sent me realling ... OMG - lol
Greatly done
OMG...OMG ... OMG ...OMG - lol
1Molly May PinkyJust read this story & wow ... all I can say is OMG.
You killed her off ...OMFG.
LOL
I can't believe you did that, here I was waiting for the HEA & wham ... holly cow, you have just sent me realling ... OMG - lol
Greatly done
OMG...OMG ... OMG ...OMG - lol
11/12/2011 c22 TeamEdwardgirl1
U killed Bella? What kinda shit is that? Bella isn't suppose 2 die! EDWARD AND BELLA R SUPPOSE 2 LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER 4 THE REST OF THEIR EXSISTANCE! That was WRONG!
Sorry but it was. Well, not sorry.
U killed Bella? What kinda shit is that? Bella isn't suppose 2 die! EDWARD AND BELLA R SUPPOSE 2 LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER 4 THE REST OF THEIR EXSISTANCE! That was WRONG!
Sorry but it was. Well, not sorry.
10/25/2011 c23 Bellamay158
Oh wow Ive just read your whole story and I loved your story line but omg I never expected it to have that ending. Congrats to you for having the courage to write an ending with such conviction. Well done you rock. Im really glad you chose to write it that way and didnt listen to all the complaints I imagine that you got. Again you did a great job but just a little word of advice...get yourself a really good beta for your next FF.
Love it.
Cheers.
Oh wow Ive just read your whole story and I loved your story line but omg I never expected it to have that ending. Congrats to you for having the courage to write an ending with such conviction. Well done you rock. Im really glad you chose to write it that way and didnt listen to all the complaints I imagine that you got. Again you did a great job but just a little word of advice...get yourself a really good beta for your next FF.
Love it.
Cheers.
7/20/2011 c23 6MyDark-Sunshine
OMG. I love your story! I cried! It was a very powerful story. But I was hoping that you'll put an alternate ending, or at least the part where Bella was fighting for her life. I'd really appreciate it if you did that. Please continue writing. God bless. :)
6MyDark-SunshineOMG. I love your story! I cried! It was a very powerful story. But I was hoping that you'll put an alternate ending, or at least the part where Bella was fighting for her life. I'd really appreciate it if you did that. Please continue writing. God bless. :)
