for The Transfer6/30 c69 Michelle Law
Ok. Has anyone told these lovebirds that antibiotics have a bad effect on birth control pills?
Ok. Has anyone told these lovebirds that antibiotics have a bad effect on birth control pills?
6/29 c56 Michelle Law
Tyler was a total DOOF, no? I mean Dinner out and/or Dancing is So Not the way to offer to make it up to a girl when 1) she is being Stalked - and you are the DOOF-BALL who let said stalker into the dorm! and 2) her BOYFRIEND is standing right BEHIND her as you are babbling this stuff to her! Sheesh, this guy just might be a few sandwiches shy of a picnic!
Tyler was a total DOOF, no? I mean Dinner out and/or Dancing is So Not the way to offer to make it up to a girl when 1) she is being Stalked - and you are the DOOF-BALL who let said stalker into the dorm! and 2) her BOYFRIEND is standing right BEHIND her as you are babbling this stuff to her! Sheesh, this guy just might be a few sandwiches shy of a picnic!
6/29 c48 Michelle Law
My favorite A Cappella group, Exit 245- the Premier all male A Cappella group at James Madison University (Had to get that plug in!)- Did a cover of this song that was picked to be on a BOCA cd. Go to youtube and check them out!
My favorite A Cappella group, Exit 245- the Premier all male A Cappella group at James Madison University (Had to get that plug in!)- Did a cover of this song that was picked to be on a BOCA cd. Go to youtube and check them out!
6/28 c31 Michelle Law
I know they are keeping Edward in the dark re the James debacle for his own good, but, trust me, it will blow up in their faces. It will come out at the least appropriate time and blindside him. I sense physical danger for Bella and /or Edward from James (he won't just roll over and play nice once they make a formal complaint, ya know). To quote multiple Star Wars characters, I have a bad feeling about this!
I know they are keeping Edward in the dark re the James debacle for his own good, but, trust me, it will blow up in their faces. It will come out at the least appropriate time and blindside him. I sense physical danger for Bella and /or Edward from James (he won't just roll over and play nice once they make a formal complaint, ya know). To quote multiple Star Wars characters, I have a bad feeling about this!
6/27 c25 Michelle Law
You have a great style of writing. Everything just flows and I don't have to get out my imagery editing pen for grammar and spelling. It's heartfelt and warm and funny as hell!
You have a great style of writing. Everything just flows and I don't have to get out my imagery editing pen for grammar and spelling. It's heartfelt and warm and funny as hell!
6/27 c25 Michelle Law
omgOMG Freaking O to the M to the FREAKING GEE! Reading chapter 24 I was cracking up at my own wit, thinking of paraphrasing Woody (Toy Story), who is known to drawl, "there's a Snake in my boot!" My rendition was " There's a Snake in His PANTS! ". and then you have Mike "Get a Clue" Newton reflect on how, if he were packing like Big E, Newton would bring that Anaconda out to play! Holy Moly! I think our brains might be sharing the same wave!
omgOMG Freaking O to the M to the FREAKING GEE! Reading chapter 24 I was cracking up at my own wit, thinking of paraphrasing Woody (Toy Story), who is known to drawl, "there's a Snake in my boot!" My rendition was " There's a Snake in His PANTS! ". and then you have Mike "Get a Clue" Newton reflect on how, if he were packing like Big E, Newton would bring that Anaconda out to play! Holy Moly! I think our brains might be sharing the same wave!
6/27 c21 Michelle Law
Once he calmed down, Jake took it with a lot more grace than I expected. Thanks for not making him a total douche bag.
Once he calmed down, Jake took it with a lot more grace than I expected. Thanks for not making him a total douche bag.
6/27 c20 Michelle Law
I' m old enough that I remember when Franco Zefferelli's R&J, with Leonard Whiting and Olivia Hussey,in the late '60's early '70's. Also, just gotta say that the confrontation was like ripping off a bandaid made of duck tape and gorilla glue: that sucker Freakin' SMARTS!
I' m old enough that I remember when Franco Zefferelli's R&J, with Leonard Whiting and Olivia Hussey,in the late '60's early '70's. Also, just gotta say that the confrontation was like ripping off a bandaid made of duck tape and gorilla glue: that sucker Freakin' SMARTS!
6/26 c18 Michelle Law
Please tell me that the angst is ending soon and that she will kick Jake to the curb in the next chapter!?
Please tell me that the angst is ending soon and that she will kick Jake to the curb in the next chapter!?
6/26 c18 Michelle Law
Wait a minute! Did they actually ever exchange phone numbers!? I must missed that memo!
Wait a minute! Did they actually ever exchange phone numbers!? I must missed that memo!
6/26 c6 Michelle Law
Thank you for the snark about the Scion! It always makes me think of a French police car- I want to shout, "Gendarmes! Gendarmes!" when I see one. Now I'll combine the two and think of French Clowns! lol
Thank you for the snark about the Scion! It always makes me think of a French police car- I want to shout, "Gendarmes! Gendarmes!" when I see one. Now I'll combine the two and think of French Clowns! lol
4/22 c1 Guest
Good morning,
I just need to say that recently I ended your story about fan fiction and sex gods, and I began this one without knowing that it was also yours, but I knew it as soon as I ended the first chapter. Only you can torture Edward like this in the very first chapter. Please, never change. Okey?
Good morning,
I just need to say that recently I ended your story about fan fiction and sex gods, and I began this one without knowing that it was also yours, but I knew it as soon as I ended the first chapter. Only you can torture Edward like this in the very first chapter. Please, never change. Okey?
1/17 c73 EdBeAlJaCRAZY94
Absolutely love this story! I don’t know how often I’ve read it by now and it’s been a little while since the last time, but I can assure you I will read it many more times! Really love the story line, the characters and the fabulous writing!
Absolutely love this story! I don’t know how often I’ve read it by now and it’s been a little while since the last time, but I can assure you I will read it many more times! Really love the story line, the characters and the fabulous writing!
12/20/2019 c73 Ben113
I love this! My only thought being that it would've been nice to see the morning after when she shows it to the Cullens.
I love this! My only thought being that it would've been nice to see the morning after when she shows it to the Cullens.
