for The Golden Harp6/19/2009 c5 
1phoenixdragonwings
great job on this one. I like how you make yourself different from the anime, but still kept to the story line. I wish Hino Kahoko stood up to the bodyguards like you did rather than give in to them and play. You're a really good writer. Keep it up!
~PhoenixDragonWings
1phoenixdragonwingsgreat job on this one. I like how you make yourself different from the anime, but still kept to the story line. I wish Hino Kahoko stood up to the bodyguards like you did rather than give in to them and play. You're a really good writer. Keep it up!
~PhoenixDragonWings
6/16/2009 c2 phoenixdragonwings
actually, this isn't much of a mary sue at all. at least, i can't tell yet. You follow the plot line very well. Are you going to end up putting pairings into the story? it is a soujo romance series after all. Or at least give us a better ending than the anime did. Anyway, great job with the story. I'd love to see more. XD
~PhoenixDragonWings
actually, this isn't much of a mary sue at all. at least, i can't tell yet. You follow the plot line very well. Are you going to end up putting pairings into the story? it is a soujo romance series after all. Or at least give us a better ending than the anime did. Anyway, great job with the story. I'd love to see more. XD
~PhoenixDragonWings
