for God Perfect10/31/2017 c5 Tlyna52
Oh darn! How very sad that you have abandoned this story as it was really very good. Wish I could have known how it would have ended.
Oh darn! How very sad that you have abandoned this story as it was really very good. Wish I could have known how it would have ended.
1/4/2014 c1 
41Lysis
Glad you told me about this story. I really like it so far.. One of the best lines I have ever read: All Apollo's male love interests turned up dead.". Yeah, I guess that could be a slight problem. Lysis
41LysisGlad you told me about this story. I really like it so far.. One of the best lines I have ever read: All Apollo's male love interests turned up dead.". Yeah, I guess that could be a slight problem. Lysis
9/23/2012 c5 6Sunsteps101
Very well written and eloquent; I enjoyed the way you described the relationship between Hera and Leto. Can't wait for the twist with Orion!
Good luck!
6Sunsteps101Very well written and eloquent; I enjoyed the way you described the relationship between Hera and Leto. Can't wait for the twist with Orion!
Good luck!
7/4/2012 c5 Guest
This is EPIC ! please update! i wanna know what happens next! (;
This is EPIC ! please update! i wanna know what happens next! (;
8/11/2011 c5 38Norrsken
Dear Delos,
You have great knowledge of the Ancient Olympic Gods and you give us a fresh and original view of them and their interminable quarrels and disagreements. Their love affairs are also most complicated. I always thought it was sad that the great Hunter Orion was killed, even if he now is one of our most beautiful star constellations. It feels good that you have managed to give him new life in this tale. I am sure that Artemis agrees...
All the best wishes and many thanks for sharing,
/ NorthernLight
38NorrskenDear Delos,
You have great knowledge of the Ancient Olympic Gods and you give us a fresh and original view of them and their interminable quarrels and disagreements. Their love affairs are also most complicated. I always thought it was sad that the great Hunter Orion was killed, even if he now is one of our most beautiful star constellations. It feels good that you have managed to give him new life in this tale. I am sure that Artemis agrees...
All the best wishes and many thanks for sharing,
/ NorthernLight
7/5/2011 c2 DeadLizard
I'm really, really enjoying this, but I couldn't help but notice you put fare instead of fair. fare=what you pay for transportation
fair=just, equal
I'm really, really enjoying this, but I couldn't help but notice you put fare instead of fair. fare=what you pay for transportation
fair=just, equal
8/5/2010 c4 random person
This story...is awesome. I love the way you portray the Olympians (especially Apollo, since he's my favorite!) and their relationships with one another. Jealousy, sympathy, indifference...the good stuff. And I love how you tied other myths into the story. Very cool. =D
This story...is awesome. I love the way you portray the Olympians (especially Apollo, since he's my favorite!) and their relationships with one another. Jealousy, sympathy, indifference...the good stuff. And I love how you tied other myths into the story. Very cool. =D
7/17/2010 c4 40Yumemakura
Oh, gods, Aklepios is not only alive and well, but he is an immortal now. I truly enjoyed the conversations between, Artemis and Hermes, and Artemis and Leto, as they really brought up their personalities. What a delight to read! And the argument of Aklepios at the end, it was priceless :)
40YumemakuraOh, gods, Aklepios is not only alive and well, but he is an immortal now. I truly enjoyed the conversations between, Artemis and Hermes, and Artemis and Leto, as they really brought up their personalities. What a delight to read! And the argument of Aklepios at the end, it was priceless :)
7/17/2010 c4 38Norrsken
Dear Delos,
As always I enjoy your quarreling and bickering Olympian Gods. Poor Asclepios! He has payed a high price indeed for his sensational medical skills. It's good that Apollon saves him from Zeus' cruel decision - but now things are getting even more tangled up. The odyssey through Ancient Greece is interesting and intriguing. I also liked to *meet* Theseus and learn more about his complicated family life.
All the best wishes and many thanks for sharing,
/ NorthernLight
38NorrskenDear Delos,
As always I enjoy your quarreling and bickering Olympian Gods. Poor Asclepios! He has payed a high price indeed for his sensational medical skills. It's good that Apollon saves him from Zeus' cruel decision - but now things are getting even more tangled up. The odyssey through Ancient Greece is interesting and intriguing. I also liked to *meet* Theseus and learn more about his complicated family life.
All the best wishes and many thanks for sharing,
/ NorthernLight
