for Pieces of Time9/6/2010 c1 
16Matelia-legwll
Just thought you ought to be aware that the character category has Lily Luna Potter listed rather than Lily Evans Potter. You can go in and change that when you have time.
Other than that, looks like a good start.
16Matelia-legwllJust thought you ought to be aware that the character category has Lily Luna Potter listed rather than Lily Evans Potter. You can go in and change that when you have time.
Other than that, looks like a good start.
8/14/2010 c1 56wishingonlightning
Haha poor Lily. This is funny, and I like the lines:
"I already know I'm short, Black," I sighed, opening up one eye to glare at him. "Tell me something I don't now."
"Okay. You have great boobs."
- That made me laugh.
Nice job! =]
56wishingonlightningHaha poor Lily. This is funny, and I like the lines:
"I already know I'm short, Black," I sighed, opening up one eye to glare at him. "Tell me something I don't now."
"Okay. You have great boobs."
- That made me laugh.
Nice job! =]
6/28/2010 c4 Smile Life Away
Laughing yet again. I love your Thanksgiving reference. Perfect, utterly perfect :)
Laughing yet again. I love your Thanksgiving reference. Perfect, utterly perfect :)
6/28/2010 c3 Smile Life Away
I was laughing so hard I was afraid someone was going to come in the room and ask what was wrong. Actually I'm almost in tears I was laughing so hard. Another great chapter. :)
I was laughing so hard I was afraid someone was going to come in the room and ask what was wrong. Actually I'm almost in tears I was laughing so hard. Another great chapter. :)
6/27/2010 c2 Smile Life Away
Another wonderful chapter that I loved reading, I'm really starting to get into this story. i'll have to steal you whenever you pop up in review tag so I can keep reading your Lily/James stories
Another wonderful chapter that I loved reading, I'm really starting to get into this story. i'll have to steal you whenever you pop up in review tag so I can keep reading your Lily/James stories
6/27/2010 c1 Smile Life Away
Absolutley hilarious I loved it so much. I look forward to reading more of the story and I love your characterization of Lily and James and their parents. The way their parents act seems so accurate
Absolutley hilarious I loved it so much. I look forward to reading more of the story and I love your characterization of Lily and James and their parents. The way their parents act seems so accurate
5/1/2010 c1 2throughDeesEyes
I really like this. I like how you portray the characters. I love the Marauders.
Ariana
2throughDeesEyesI really like this. I like how you portray the characters. I love the Marauders.
Ariana
