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This chapter is child sexual abuse, because Harry has not hit puberty.
This chapter is child sexual abuse, because Harry has not hit puberty.
3/10/2013 c6 
8Valinda Blade
I hope you haven't given up on this story completely. I'd like to read more sometime.
8Valinda BladeI hope you haven't given up on this story completely. I'd like to read more sometime.
6/24/2011 c6 ppurpple
i love this story please please please update
btw, is harry going to be with Frederick again, and i probably should know the answer but does harry actually ok with frederick doing those things to him, if he has done anything
i love this story please please please update
btw, is harry going to be with Frederick again, and i probably should know the answer but does harry actually ok with frederick doing those things to him, if he has done anything
9/12/2010 c6 1taylor-996
This is such a great story! I can't wait to see how the rest of their school years go and if Fredrick will be reintroduced later on. Fantastic work and please update soon!
1taylor-996This is such a great story! I can't wait to see how the rest of their school years go and if Fredrick will be reintroduced later on. Fantastic work and please update soon!
8/15/2010 c6 whyly
Interesting. I like it so far, especially since the scene when he was young wasn't too graphic and, if you choose, you can take his comment that some things were gross after he looked it up, to mean that he and Fredrick hadn't gone too far.
I don't really think child services would send him back to the Dursleys in real life given the photos, but whatever.I'm very interested to see where you'll take this.
Interesting. I like it so far, especially since the scene when he was young wasn't too graphic and, if you choose, you can take his comment that some things were gross after he looked it up, to mean that he and Fredrick hadn't gone too far.
I don't really think child services would send him back to the Dursleys in real life given the photos, but whatever.I'm very interested to see where you'll take this.
7/25/2010 c6 lizh12795
I hate stories where Harry is sexually abused. Most of the time it seems to be an excuse for bad child porn. Your story doesn't really fit into that catagory but at the same time I worry about it's message. Of course I have read the stories where Harry is "kidnapped" from abusive Dursleys only to end up in a much better situation. Usually these stories don't have a sexual relationship mixed up with the parental. If you plan on showing Harry as never having a problem with the fact he was sexually active at a young age with his parental figure than I really cannot support your story. I can see Harry not having a problem with it and even enjoying it because it started before he was able to understand the situation. To him and alot of other children out there it can seem to be just another activity they do with thier family to show their affection. At some point in thier lives they have to deal with the fact it was wrong even if it didn't and still doesn't feel wrong.
Sorry about writing so much. Your plot is very unique and I like your writing style. I will look for updates and am very interested where you take it in the future.
I hate stories where Harry is sexually abused. Most of the time it seems to be an excuse for bad child porn. Your story doesn't really fit into that catagory but at the same time I worry about it's message. Of course I have read the stories where Harry is "kidnapped" from abusive Dursleys only to end up in a much better situation. Usually these stories don't have a sexual relationship mixed up with the parental. If you plan on showing Harry as never having a problem with the fact he was sexually active at a young age with his parental figure than I really cannot support your story. I can see Harry not having a problem with it and even enjoying it because it started before he was able to understand the situation. To him and alot of other children out there it can seem to be just another activity they do with thier family to show their affection. At some point in thier lives they have to deal with the fact it was wrong even if it didn't and still doesn't feel wrong.
Sorry about writing so much. Your plot is very unique and I like your writing style. I will look for updates and am very interested where you take it in the future.
7/3/2010 c5 5The Dead Snake
Yeah, this is freakishly disturbing. But then, that was your goal, right? For a bad thing to make Harry feel better? So now I'm wondering how it ends- if Harry ever turns against Fredrick, what you make his relationship be with Malfoy, what happens to the girls, all of that. So, even though it's controversial and confusing, I'd like to read more. Plus, your English isn't that bad, so I don't mind reading it :)
5The Dead SnakeYeah, this is freakishly disturbing. But then, that was your goal, right? For a bad thing to make Harry feel better? So now I'm wondering how it ends- if Harry ever turns against Fredrick, what you make his relationship be with Malfoy, what happens to the girls, all of that. So, even though it's controversial and confusing, I'd like to read more. Plus, your English isn't that bad, so I don't mind reading it :)
5/27/2010 c5 8Valinda Blade
Wow. I hope you haven't given up on this. I like the new twist on the story. It's really good so far. I hope you put up something new soon please.
8Valinda BladeWow. I hope you haven't given up on this. I like the new twist on the story. It's really good so far. I hope you put up something new soon please.
2/6/2010 c5 srey nait
oh wow. the beginning was kinda awkward...ok, it was really awkward, but i'm glad i read on (even though i kind skipped that pedo!fredrick scene. it's pretty interesting so far. i hope you update soon.
oh wow. the beginning was kinda awkward...ok, it was really awkward, but i'm glad i read on (even though i kind skipped that pedo!fredrick scene. it's pretty interesting so far. i hope you update soon.
