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3bmoney4ever
This is a cool story, but you might want to have someone proofread this to clean up some of the grammar errors. It is a really unique and interesting story, just could be cleaned up a bit
3bmoney4everThis is a cool story, but you might want to have someone proofread this to clean up some of the grammar errors. It is a really unique and interesting story, just could be cleaned up a bit
3/17/2012 c20 Sportshero
Redy the red yoshi and Eloshi have freak ability like say Calvin Johnson or Larry Fitzgerald! The Lylat birds have the best recieving core. Falco is like'a Aaron rodgers/vick combo, very unstoppable.!
Redy the red yoshi and Eloshi have freak ability like say Calvin Johnson or Larry Fitzgerald! The Lylat birds have the best recieving core. Falco is like'a Aaron rodgers/vick combo, very unstoppable.!
1/17/2012 c20 11sableye
This chapter was very good.
This is going to be an interesting game between the Cheetahs and Lylat Birds.
It will be a huge division battle between Hammerheads and the F-Zero Brutes.
Keep up the good work.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
11sableyeThis chapter was very good.
This is going to be an interesting game between the Cheetahs and Lylat Birds.
It will be a huge division battle between Hammerheads and the F-Zero Brutes.
Keep up the good work.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
12/12/2011 c19 S.R.J.S. Fangirl from Pl
Hey!
It's me - The BIGGEST Fangirl of ''Sonic The Hedgehog", ''Ratchet & Clank", ''Jak & Daxter" and ''Sly Cooper" Video Games Serieses from Poland(like you see;P)!
In another crossover, with 6 chapters, you've got my comment there, you know about this?
So remember - If you're the BIGGEST Fan of those 4 COOLEST Video Games Serieses(Like me)...:)
If you're not...:(
Remember - I'll be waiting!
See ya pretty soon!
;);P;D
Hey!
It's me - The BIGGEST Fangirl of ''Sonic The Hedgehog", ''Ratchet & Clank", ''Jak & Daxter" and ''Sly Cooper" Video Games Serieses from Poland(like you see;P)!
In another crossover, with 6 chapters, you've got my comment there, you know about this?
So remember - If you're the BIGGEST Fan of those 4 COOLEST Video Games Serieses(Like me)...:)
If you're not...:(
Remember - I'll be waiting!
See ya pretty soon!
;);P;D
10/11/2011 c19 alex 988
cant wait for chapter 20!
cant wait for chapter 20!
10/11/2011 c19 sableye
This chapter was very good.
It was a very good comeback that the Lylat birds are making against Primates.
It was a very good game between the Blood Hounds and the Dragons which were two very defensive sides in the game.
Keep up the good work.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
This chapter was very good.
It was a very good comeback that the Lylat birds are making against Primates.
It was a very good game between the Blood Hounds and the Dragons which were two very defensive sides in the game.
Keep up the good work.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
9/15/2011 c18 alex 988
cant wait for chapter 19!
cant wait for chapter 19!
9/15/2011 c18 alex 988
cant wait for chapter 19!
cant wait for chapter 19!
9/8/2011 c18 sableye
This chapter was very good.
It was a battle of defense between Ultra Bros and Dragons.
It will be interesting to see how the rest of the season turns out.
Keep up the good work.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
This chapter was very good.
It was a battle of defense between Ultra Bros and Dragons.
It will be interesting to see how the rest of the season turns out.
Keep up the good work.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
9/3/2011 c17 alex 988
cant wait for chapter 18!
cant wait for chapter 18!
9/3/2011 c17 alex 988
cant wait for chapter 14!
cant wait for chapter 14!
8/31/2011 c17 alex 988
cant wait to read chapter 18!
cant wait to read chapter 18!
8/31/2011 c17 alex 988
cant wait to read chapter 18!
cant wait to read chapter 18!
8/13/2011 c17 sableye
This chapter was very good.
It was funny when we heard Rosalina has a crush on Mario.
The game between Lylat Birds and Hammerheads is sure to be a close one because Lylat Birds found a way to get down from their own 3-yard line to their end-zone to score a touchdown all in under two minutes.
It will be interesting to see what happens next chapter.
Keep up the good work.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
This chapter was very good.
It was funny when we heard Rosalina has a crush on Mario.
The game between Lylat Birds and Hammerheads is sure to be a close one because Lylat Birds found a way to get down from their own 3-yard line to their end-zone to score a touchdown all in under two minutes.
It will be interesting to see what happens next chapter.
Keep up the good work.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
