for THE OURAN HIGH LADIES7/19/2010 c1 
1Runefarmer816
i really like this story, but i wish it was easier to read. it just needs better paragraph structure. :33
1Runefarmer816i really like this story, but i wish it was easier to read. it just needs better paragraph structure. :33
5/19/2010 c1 4Xarii
The over all plot seems good but what bothers me is the punctuation and all that. It'd be nice if you continued! :D But again, the punctuation and grammar. Just think of this a constructive criticism!
4XariiThe over all plot seems good but what bothers me is the punctuation and all that. It'd be nice if you continued! :D But again, the punctuation and grammar. Just think of this a constructive criticism!
5/18/2009 c1 Loch Ness Author
No. NO. NO! NO!
I don't understand a single thing you wrote!
What language do you originally speak?
What happened to punctuation?
What happened, altogether?
I don't get any of it.
Sorry.
But really.
I don't get it.
Honestly.
for real.
really.
yea
No. NO. NO! NO!
I don't understand a single thing you wrote!
What language do you originally speak?
What happened to punctuation?
What happened, altogether?
I don't get any of it.
Sorry.
But really.
I don't get it.
Honestly.
for real.
really.
yea
