for Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha MemorieS5/5/2012 c2 kektop
Wow its been 4 years since you last updated this story? Why! Its so good! You left people hanging and trying to guess why she attacked her own daughter! It would be great if you could update and get people reading this again! I subscribed to Story Alert in hopes that you would continue the story!
I await the next chapter!
Wow its been 4 years since you last updated this story? Why! Its so good! You left people hanging and trying to guess why she attacked her own daughter! It would be great if you could update and get people reading this again! I subscribed to Story Alert in hopes that you would continue the story!
I await the next chapter!
6/8/2011 c2 XxLiLAzNxX
Whoa Alicia is still alive. I want to see what happens if Fate finds out about this.
Hope to read the nest chapter soon.
Whoa Alicia is still alive. I want to see what happens if Fate finds out about this.
Hope to read the nest chapter soon.
5/26/2010 c1 MGLNS
This story is quite interesting, will there be an update for this seems to be dead but i really hope chapter will be out, this story is addictive, want to know whats next. Hope there will an update and keep up the good work. Got my support, Go Go writing good stories.
This story is quite interesting, will there be an update for this seems to be dead but i really hope chapter will be out, this story is addictive, want to know whats next. Hope there will an update and keep up the good work. Got my support, Go Go writing good stories.
12/11/2009 c2 
3Windraider
Is it possible to reupdate this story?
I really look forward to reading more off this,this happens to be the most intersting one for me out off your collection of stories.
3WindraiderIs it possible to reupdate this story?
I really look forward to reading more off this,this happens to be the most intersting one for me out off your collection of stories.
11/25/2008 c2 4TweekinTinkaToy
How much do I wanna bet that was the real Alicia Testarossa? Hahahaha, I can't wait to see what you're gonna do with this when Fate finds out her sister(of sorts) is alive and Mr Spaghetti is back from the grave.
4TweekinTinkaToyHow much do I wanna bet that was the real Alicia Testarossa? Hahahaha, I can't wait to see what you're gonna do with this when Fate finds out her sister(of sorts) is alive and Mr Spaghetti is back from the grave.
11/20/2008 c2 bluecoow
Nice story with potentials there. Though Vivio's reaction at the end..wouldn't it be a bit overreacting for "knees gave away and she fell to the ground" ? It will more probably be stunned than too shock to stand straight.
Waiting for updates..
Nice story with potentials there. Though Vivio's reaction at the end..wouldn't it be a bit overreacting for "knees gave away and she fell to the ground" ? It will more probably be stunned than too shock to stand straight.
Waiting for updates..
11/7/2008 c1 myfartssmellikemustard
Nice work! Very well written!
(this is Katlyn, by the way) I'll be looking forward to the next few chapters!
Nice work! Very well written!
(this is Katlyn, by the way) I'll be looking forward to the next few chapters!
11/7/2008 c1 10xavier12336
Um, is this chapter an epilogue as i never see Vivio yet but please update soon. Want to see how this story progresses. xD
10xavier12336Um, is this chapter an epilogue as i never see Vivio yet but please update soon. Want to see how this story progresses. xD
