for Acting Lines4/3/2014 c1 
9FlurriesOfWords
Very sweet, I think you could've made it a bit longer as to add more of a struggle.
9FlurriesOfWordsVery sweet, I think you could've made it a bit longer as to add more of a struggle.
8/14/2010 c1 kyphhyph
Loved this! The title fitted so incredibly well, and I love how she accidentally let it out, and arghh! It was so completely 'awww'
Favourite Line: "I have every intention of catching you, Evans. Just let yourself fall," He whispered;
Amazing work!
Loved this! The title fitted so incredibly well, and I love how she accidentally let it out, and arghh! It was so completely 'awww'
Favourite Line: "I have every intention of catching you, Evans. Just let yourself fall," He whispered;
Amazing work!
7/25/2010 c1 56wishingonlightning
Aw cute! I love how Lily accidentally slips up and tells James how she feels.
"I have every intention of catching you, Evans. Just let yourself fall." - I love that line!
Adorable fic! =]
56wishingonlightningAw cute! I love how Lily accidentally slips up and tells James how she feels.
"I have every intention of catching you, Evans. Just let yourself fall." - I love that line!
Adorable fic! =]
7/24/2010 c1 16Zombie Reine
OHMAGOD! I'm starting to become a Lily/James fan. Darn you! *wink* This was really good, I know how it feels to live your life like it's a play. The lines are all there, always the same, you want to change them but it feels like you can't. This story struck home and was very realistic and well-written.♥♥♥
16Zombie ReineOHMAGOD! I'm starting to become a Lily/James fan. Darn you! *wink* This was really good, I know how it feels to live your life like it's a play. The lines are all there, always the same, you want to change them but it feels like you can't. This story struck home and was very realistic and well-written.♥♥♥
7/24/2010 c1 109RoseScor90
Lectures do tend to make us drowsy, right? Okay, major understatement, I'll admit.
But the story was nice and the 'acting the lines' part was good too!
109RoseScor90Lectures do tend to make us drowsy, right? Okay, major understatement, I'll admit.
But the story was nice and the 'acting the lines' part was good too!
7/7/2010 c1 dex lucas
This is so cute :)
""I have every intention of catching you, Evans. Just let yourself fall," He whispered."
^^ I love that line so much ^^
Good job! :D
This is so cute :)
""I have every intention of catching you, Evans. Just let yourself fall," He whispered."
^^ I love that line so much ^^
Good job! :D
6/11/2010 c1 6in sync
This was awesome. I really liked this fic, I just would've liked to see more description towards the end.
Lovely work!
~Mystii
6in syncThis was awesome. I really liked this fic, I just would've liked to see more description towards the end.
Lovely work!
~Mystii
6/5/2010 c1 21Written Sparks
This is great. I love fics about Lily realizing she loves James. Great job.
21Written SparksThis is great. I love fics about Lily realizing she loves James. Great job.
6/3/2010 c1 Smile Life Away
I know the feeling of being bored during a classroom lecture. Anyway, this review is about your story. I must say it was pretty great, I liked the build-up and the conclusion of course. Thanks for writing :)
I know the feeling of being bored during a classroom lecture. Anyway, this review is about your story. I must say it was pretty great, I liked the build-up and the conclusion of course. Thanks for writing :)
5/27/2010 c1 andrea 3
waaaaaaaaaaaaaa hace muchisisisisisimoo qe no leia este! hai hai haiii me encantaa 3 3 3
waaaaaaaaaaaaaa hace muchisisisisisimoo qe no leia este! hai hai haiii me encantaa 3 3 3
