for Broken Ties9/24/2017 c1 Guest
Makem another chapter where they all find out
Makem another chapter where they all find out
1/11/2009 c1 
2Piole
Aw, poor Perce...this is a great fic. Truly original take in Perce´s origins.
Thanks for sharing.
2PioleAw, poor Perce...this is a great fic. Truly original take in Perce´s origins.
Thanks for sharing.
11/9/2008 c1 186Lady Azar de Tameran
This is such a promising concept, and I'm sad that you have yet to continue. I admit a certain fondness for Perceptor, despite the fact that he is so often ignored. I do hope that you write more on this story. In fact, I look forward to it.
Zari
186Lady Azar de TameranThis is such a promising concept, and I'm sad that you have yet to continue. I admit a certain fondness for Perceptor, despite the fact that he is so often ignored. I do hope that you write more on this story. In fact, I look forward to it.
Zari
9/8/2008 c1 9tomorrow4eva
Nice story, and nice reasoning on why Perceptor isn't running around using all of his modes/abilities.
9tomorrow4evaNice story, and nice reasoning on why Perceptor isn't running around using all of his modes/abilities.
6/12/2008 c1 1Shadow Vision
WOW, this fic was amazing! I would love to see it continued as more than a one shot. Perhaps Ratchet and Wheeljack's reactions and a confrontation with Megatron in battle where Perceptor finally is forced to reveal what he truly is capable of!
1Shadow VisionWOW, this fic was amazing! I would love to see it continued as more than a one shot. Perhaps Ratchet and Wheeljack's reactions and a confrontation with Megatron in battle where Perceptor finally is forced to reveal what he truly is capable of!
6/9/2008 c1 2Shaymayca1
Excellent story, It was well paced and easy to read. (perceptor centered fics tend to be mind-boggling wordy) I hope you plan on continuing this, I would like to see where you(and your beta) could take this.
2Shaymayca1Excellent story, It was well paced and easy to read. (perceptor centered fics tend to be mind-boggling wordy) I hope you plan on continuing this, I would like to see where you(and your beta) could take this.
6/9/2008 c1 55kirin-saga
Oh wow! You did an excellent job with this bunny!
Poor Perceptor! Having Megatron and Soundwave as his creators. I wonder when Megatron will reveal Perceptor's secret and how much damage it will do.
I'm glad Finehold got captured, because if he hadn't Perceptor would still be with the Decepticons. Well, actually, he'd most likely be dead by know.
I'm glad Ratchet and Wheeljack will let him tell them in his own time, even if Ratchet had to snoop first. And Wheeljack's reaction to Ratchet's snooping was funny.
I love this so much... and I hope you're considering a sequel.
55kirin-sagaOh wow! You did an excellent job with this bunny!
Poor Perceptor! Having Megatron and Soundwave as his creators. I wonder when Megatron will reveal Perceptor's secret and how much damage it will do.
I'm glad Finehold got captured, because if he hadn't Perceptor would still be with the Decepticons. Well, actually, he'd most likely be dead by know.
I'm glad Ratchet and Wheeljack will let him tell them in his own time, even if Ratchet had to snoop first. And Wheeljack's reaction to Ratchet's snooping was funny.
I love this so much... and I hope you're considering a sequel.
6/9/2008 c1 fin
Oh My God! This story makes so much sense that it's almost scary, so update Please!
Oh My God! This story makes so much sense that it's almost scary, so update Please!
6/9/2008 c1 kitkat
Finally, a fic starring Perceptor and a possibility about his past.
Perceptor is my favorite character so I'm very happy about this fic and it shows Perceptor in a different light. That and it had a lot of sparkling Perceptor which I never see a lot of.
Finally, a fic starring Perceptor and a possibility about his past.
Perceptor is my favorite character so I'm very happy about this fic and it shows Perceptor in a different light. That and it had a lot of sparkling Perceptor which I never see a lot of.
6/9/2008 c1 28Carmilla DeWinter
Interesting take on an often ignored character, and you're actually making a frightening amount of sense.
28Carmilla DeWinterInteresting take on an often ignored character, and you're actually making a frightening amount of sense.
6/9/2008 c1 15Prime Revolver
Wow, that was really cool and very well done. My fav scientists to! I look forward to see how this comes out!
-P.R.
oh and i wouldn't mind reading the conv. if you don't mind:)
15Prime RevolverWow, that was really cool and very well done. My fav scientists to! I look forward to see how this comes out!
-P.R.
oh and i wouldn't mind reading the conv. if you don't mind:)
