for Dark Soul3/5/2017 c5 BlueMew24
I love this story. I like the whole AU you have for this. I hope that the story hasn't been abandoned.
I love this story. I like the whole AU you have for this. I hope that the story hasn't been abandoned.
2/12/2017 c5 AccountKiller00010000000000000
Looking forward to reading the next chapter if it comes our :)
Sincerely,
Cyres
Looking forward to reading the next chapter if it comes our :)
Sincerely,
Cyres
3/17/2016 c5 QWERTY
This seems like what I think poetry should be. That's a compliment.
This seems like what I think poetry should be. That's a compliment.
10/12/2014 c5 
2Ice Night
I love this and I hope you update this and I hope you haven't abandoned this lovely story
2Ice NightI love this and I hope you update this and I hope you haven't abandoned this lovely story
10/3/2014 c5 1Indecisive Bob
Excellent story so far! This is the first story I've read from Gaara's point of view, and it's certainly interesting. The power that your Gaara casually wields is... awe inspiring. I hope that at some point, you will come back and finish this story.
1Indecisive BobExcellent story so far! This is the first story I've read from Gaara's point of view, and it's certainly interesting. The power that your Gaara casually wields is... awe inspiring. I hope that at some point, you will come back and finish this story.
3/7/2014 c5 Elise
Amazing, thrilling, great, very well written, unique, fantastic, original, awesome story. Please continue. I really like it.
Amazing, thrilling, great, very well written, unique, fantastic, original, awesome story. Please continue. I really like it.
2/11/2014 c5 8Lady Randomosity
Any chance SG-1's gonna make an appearance in this fic?
I like the story its good.
8Lady RandomosityAny chance SG-1's gonna make an appearance in this fic?
I like the story its good.
9/7/2013 c5 197chaoscat
I love this! I think it's my favorite charecterization of Gaara that I've ever read including canon. Thank You for writing this, please update soon : )
197chaoscatI love this! I think it's my favorite charecterization of Gaara that I've ever read including canon. Thank You for writing this, please update soon : )
2/18/2012 c5 2Marikalay
It's a shame that you've never gotten around to finishing this one. It really captured my attention and I'm dying to read more.
2MarikalayIt's a shame that you've never gotten around to finishing this one. It really captured my attention and I'm dying to read more.
8/28/2011 c3 4Elaine du Lac
I totally lovelovelove the idea of Naruto contributing blood to power up Gaara's sand (and Gaara nearly orgasming from it!) and the extra properties of Naruto's chakra that allowed Gaara to feel more than the earth. It's my number one favorite Gaara/Naruto interaction scene from now on and so far, regardless of slash or just friendship categories.
4Elaine du LacI totally lovelovelove the idea of Naruto contributing blood to power up Gaara's sand (and Gaara nearly orgasming from it!) and the extra properties of Naruto's chakra that allowed Gaara to feel more than the earth. It's my number one favorite Gaara/Naruto interaction scene from now on and so far, regardless of slash or just friendship categories.
6/30/2011 c5 18DemonKittyAngel
Have I ever mentioned I love this fic? Well, I do. I know I've read it before but I just went through and was sorely disapointed in myself to find I hadn't reveiwed yet.
I don't like to go on and on praising things so I'll just say I like how you write Gaara, Naruto is a nice play on the 'mask' idea, and it's really nice to see how you carry the story with so little. It doesn't feel like it's ever a stand still even thought in retrospect, it easily is. ^^
What does often catch me in this is that it's in the crossover section and besides the little side stop where he kills Hathor (I'm presuming) I don't see much happening. If this is just a start to some other crossover event that's coming up upon Naruto's escape or something I get it, but it does feel slightly out of place where it is. But I'm totally happy it's here 'cause I'd prob never find this superb writing amidst the huge scores of Naruto fanfiction.
You DO plan to come back to this, don't you? It's a really great story and you can't just leave poor Naruto captured! Gaara still has to kill him! (Sorry, that's a serious promise my friends and I have in rl. It's like you're not allowed to die unless I'm the one there to do it in the end.)
Oh, and Temari hasn't gotten all those decorative fans for her birthday. Those HAVE to be given.
18DemonKittyAngelHave I ever mentioned I love this fic? Well, I do. I know I've read it before but I just went through and was sorely disapointed in myself to find I hadn't reveiwed yet.
I don't like to go on and on praising things so I'll just say I like how you write Gaara, Naruto is a nice play on the 'mask' idea, and it's really nice to see how you carry the story with so little. It doesn't feel like it's ever a stand still even thought in retrospect, it easily is. ^^
What does often catch me in this is that it's in the crossover section and besides the little side stop where he kills Hathor (I'm presuming) I don't see much happening. If this is just a start to some other crossover event that's coming up upon Naruto's escape or something I get it, but it does feel slightly out of place where it is. But I'm totally happy it's here 'cause I'd prob never find this superb writing amidst the huge scores of Naruto fanfiction.
You DO plan to come back to this, don't you? It's a really great story and you can't just leave poor Naruto captured! Gaara still has to kill him! (Sorry, that's a serious promise my friends and I have in rl. It's like you're not allowed to die unless I'm the one there to do it in the end.)
Oh, and Temari hasn't gotten all those decorative fans for her birthday. Those HAVE to be given.
12/4/2010 c5 CraZybeyeZ
this is a really great story probabily the best beggining for a story about gaara yet plz dont discontinue it
this is a really great story probabily the best beggining for a story about gaara yet plz dont discontinue it
