for The Flood of Milk2/19/2011 c1 WormQueen
Just wait until KopakaPerson and I type up "The Milk Room"!
Just wait until KopakaPerson and I type up "The Milk Room"!
9/25/2007 c1 
17prettygirl17
Very creative for a six yr old. the milk has to be an inside joke. I enjoyed reading it to my brothers.
The last part would actually be something good to build upon.
Tell Mikey I enjoyed reading his story and ask him to make more if he wants to.
17prettygirl17Very creative for a six yr old. the milk has to be an inside joke. I enjoyed reading it to my brothers.
The last part would actually be something good to build upon.
Tell Mikey I enjoyed reading his story and ask him to make more if he wants to.
8/16/2007 c1 3Masterweaver
Actually, I read Lord Of The Ring at six, and began designing my first planet. Ah, the memories...
Good for him. I think if he adds a bit of dialouge, strecthes his descriptions a bit, and punches copperflame in the nose, he might have a great tale. Not that he doesn't now... Is he writing a sequel?
3MasterweaverActually, I read Lord Of The Ring at six, and began designing my first planet. Ah, the memories...
Good for him. I think if he adds a bit of dialouge, strecthes his descriptions a bit, and punches copperflame in the nose, he might have a great tale. Not that he doesn't now... Is he writing a sequel?
8/3/2007 c1 9Sir Loin The First
Hmm... it was okay. I mean the milk thing was wierd. But then again, what do you expect from a 6-year old? :P
However, the thing does seem kidna outlandish from a fan-point, due to the 2nd MoLi and other stuff.
9Sir Loin The FirstHmm... it was okay. I mean the milk thing was wierd. But then again, what do you expect from a 6-year old? :P
However, the thing does seem kidna outlandish from a fan-point, due to the 2nd MoLi and other stuff.
8/2/2007 c1 me
All things considered, it was pretty good for a 6 year old, very few kids his age(that I know of) have that vocabulary.
All things considered, it was pretty good for a 6 year old, very few kids his age(that I know of) have that vocabulary.
