for My Brother4/5/2015 c2 Guest
I can't read this. Sorry but i just don't get it.
I can't read this. Sorry but i just don't get it.
2/1/2013 c5 
8Biennia Baron
I'm sorry, I can't read this. I would love to say more, but overall it was unreadable. Perhaps you should look into getting a beta.
8Biennia BaronI'm sorry, I can't read this. I would love to say more, but overall it was unreadable. Perhaps you should look into getting a beta.
8/23/2010 c1 Melinda Halliwell
I don't think this is how you spell it but it's chloroform
I don't think this is how you spell it but it's chloroform
8/27/2007 c1 Maggy
someone probably told u but the knock out stuf is called chloroforme but im not sure on spelling, btw luv the story!
someone probably told u but the knock out stuf is called chloroforme but im not sure on spelling, btw luv the story!
3/30/2007 c1 PrInCeSsFBi
SON OF A BITCH
YOU PUT CHORLUFORM ON MY BABY
THIS IS THE SECOND TIME I'M READ THIS
IM GETTING MY SISTERS
WE GOING TO SUMMON THOSE DEMONS OFF THE NET
{hint for ya'll there is three of us}
SON OF A BITCH
YOU PUT CHORLUFORM ON MY BABY
THIS IS THE SECOND TIME I'M READ THIS
IM GETTING MY SISTERS
WE GOING TO SUMMON THOSE DEMONS OFF THE NET
{hint for ya'll there is three of us}
3/26/2007 c1 PrInCeSsFBi
NO
CHRISY
WHO COULD YOU SHOVE A CLOTH OVER MY LOVER
BUT HE IS O CUTE WHEN HE IS SLEEPING
DAMN DEMONS
MY SISTERS AND ARE JUST AS POWERFUL AS THE CHARMED ONES
WE ARE VERY POWERFUL AND I WILL SUMMON YOU RASS OFF THE COMPUTER YOU HARM CHRIS IN ANY WAY
NO
CHRISY
WHO COULD YOU SHOVE A CLOTH OVER MY LOVER
BUT HE IS O CUTE WHEN HE IS SLEEPING
DAMN DEMONS
MY SISTERS AND ARE JUST AS POWERFUL AS THE CHARMED ONES
WE ARE VERY POWERFUL AND I WILL SUMMON YOU RASS OFF THE COMPUTER YOU HARM CHRIS IN ANY WAY
3/4/2007 c13 4neb92
Yah, it was sort of lame. The story kinda had a good plot, but the best part was the humor, sorry. I still enjoyed reading it though.
4neb92Yah, it was sort of lame. The story kinda had a good plot, but the best part was the humor, sorry. I still enjoyed reading it though.
3/4/2007 c11 neb92
You started sophomore year while writing this fic? Poor you. Im a freshman, and during first semester, I didn't have any homework, but by the time I got home I was exhausted. I had all my academic classes, Biology, Algebra, and Acc. English I. IT sucked. I like this chapter, by the way. I love it when girls try to make guys jealous, it makes em stupid.
PS Im a guy, so I can't say anything bad about em, its in our rule book lol. Otherwise I would.
You started sophomore year while writing this fic? Poor you. Im a freshman, and during first semester, I didn't have any homework, but by the time I got home I was exhausted. I had all my academic classes, Biology, Algebra, and Acc. English I. IT sucked. I like this chapter, by the way. I love it when girls try to make guys jealous, it makes em stupid.
PS Im a guy, so I can't say anything bad about em, its in our rule book lol. Otherwise I would.
3/4/2007 c10 neb92
There wasn't a whole lot of Leo bashing... That makes me sad. Oh well. By the way, you really do have an obsession with GA, don't you? I mean, I do to, but not to the level of mixing a show about surgery and a show about witches together... Oh well. Leo really was an ass in this episode, though, wasn't he?
There wasn't a whole lot of Leo bashing... That makes me sad. Oh well. By the way, you really do have an obsession with GA, don't you? I mean, I do to, but not to the level of mixing a show about surgery and a show about witches together... Oh well. Leo really was an ass in this episode, though, wasn't he?
3/4/2007 c9 neb92
You said that there was going to be Leo bashing THIS chapter! You lied! Oh well, as long as its in the next one and its funny enough, I'll let you off the hook.
You said that there was going to be Leo bashing THIS chapter! You lied! Oh well, as long as its in the next one and its funny enough, I'll let you off the hook.
3/4/2007 c8 neb92
Leo HATE! YES! Finally lol. Ive been waiting the whole story, since its obvious that Wyatt and Chris both hate him... I can't wait, I gotta start reading it! Lol. Im rambling again, aren't I?
Leo HATE! YES! Finally lol. Ive been waiting the whole story, since its obvious that Wyatt and Chris both hate him... I can't wait, I gotta start reading it! Lol. Im rambling again, aren't I?
3/4/2007 c5 neb92
Woah. This chappie had alot of run on sentences, but I definately got the whole thing, so that's good. I really like the humor in this story, just so ya know.
Woah. This chappie had alot of run on sentences, but I definately got the whole thing, so that's good. I really like the humor in this story, just so ya know.
3/4/2007 c4 neb92
I like the plot and the storyline, but all four chapters are gramattically incorrect. But its a good story, just a little hard to read... Im actually not ranting in this review though... wierd.
I like the plot and the storyline, but all four chapters are gramattically incorrect. But its a good story, just a little hard to read... Im actually not ranting in this review though... wierd.
3/4/2007 c3 neb92
I REALLY hate Gideon. He really is alot nicer in the actual show, but in fanfiction they make him out to be a jerk. I can't wait to find out how Chris gets his powers back
I REALLY hate Gideon. He really is alot nicer in the actual show, but in fanfiction they make him out to be a jerk. I can't wait to find out how Chris gets his powers back
3/4/2007 c2 neb92
No Chris? How could you not put Chris in every chapter of a Chris centered story... Lol. Im gonna read this then read your Grey's Anatomy fics, since Im a HUGE fan. I read your profile, and I decided I wanted to tell you my favorite quote, but Ill tell ya when I review for the GA one.
PS (I really like the story, I ramble when I review, and Im so sorry, I do it with everybody, I swear!)
No Chris? How could you not put Chris in every chapter of a Chris centered story... Lol. Im gonna read this then read your Grey's Anatomy fics, since Im a HUGE fan. I read your profile, and I decided I wanted to tell you my favorite quote, but Ill tell ya when I review for the GA one.
PS (I really like the story, I ramble when I review, and Im so sorry, I do it with everybody, I swear!)
