for Endings4/22/2005 c1 
2k+KatLeePT
We are not Cole/Phoebe fans, but we still enjoyed this little ficlet. Though short, this drabble packs a bitter-sweet punch filled with deep and beautiful wording and vivid emotions. If you're not too enraptured by Cole and Phoebe to never consider a Cole/Piper romance, may we humbly suggest you check out our fic series, Love on the High Seas, where each of the four Halliwell sisters have their own love and all are Pirates? If you do read us, please be sure to let us know what you think!
2k+KatLeePTWe are not Cole/Phoebe fans, but we still enjoyed this little ficlet. Though short, this drabble packs a bitter-sweet punch filled with deep and beautiful wording and vivid emotions. If you're not too enraptured by Cole and Phoebe to never consider a Cole/Piper romance, may we humbly suggest you check out our fic series, Love on the High Seas, where each of the four Halliwell sisters have their own love and all are Pirates? If you do read us, please be sure to let us know what you think!
3/31/2005 c1 Real-Blonde-in-Florida
Absolutely excellent. I love this story through old Phoebe's eyes. I especially love the ending - with her waiting to change the past and her life. I am sure she did and that she and Cole lived happily ever after. Thank you for a great story.
Absolutely excellent. I love this story through old Phoebe's eyes. I especially love the ending - with her waiting to change the past and her life. I am sure she did and that she and Cole lived happily ever after. Thank you for a great story.
3/27/2005 c1 28PlasmicFemale
One timers rarely work - I should know, I've written some of the worst. But you pulled it off amazingly well. Your descriptions were great, the idea was great...it was all great. I loved the line, "...because during the day she wouldn’t allow herself the luxury of remembering..." I couldn't have put it into words better. Great work.
28PlasmicFemaleOne timers rarely work - I should know, I've written some of the worst. But you pulled it off amazingly well. Your descriptions were great, the idea was great...it was all great. I loved the line, "...because during the day she wouldn’t allow herself the luxury of remembering..." I couldn't have put it into words better. Great work.
3/27/2005 c1 55Mickis
Very beautiful. You just about said what I've wanted Phoebe to admit for so long, ever since she turned her back on Cole. And you did it beautifully.
I was
55MickisVery beautiful. You just about said what I've wanted Phoebe to admit for so long, ever since she turned her back on Cole. And you did it beautifully.
I was
3/26/2005 c1 32PheobeColelovers
OMG! I had the same idea. I just haven't had time to put it on here. I was going to bring the old Pheobe back but this time she would tell Pheobe that Cole was the SOurce so that they would have enough time to save him
32PheobeColeloversOMG! I had the same idea. I just haven't had time to put it on here. I was going to bring the old Pheobe back but this time she would tell Pheobe that Cole was the SOurce so that they would have enough time to save him
3/26/2005 c1 20Gwen Truong
I'm so happy to read you again. I sincerely miss your writing. And it's worth waiting. Yeah, I believe this old Phoebe would say what needed to be said. And believe in her fate with Cole. You described this lady's feeling excellently.
20Gwen TruongI'm so happy to read you again. I sincerely miss your writing. And it's worth waiting. Yeah, I believe this old Phoebe would say what needed to be said. And believe in her fate with Cole. You described this lady's feeling excellently.
