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4/9/2006 c1 SpinAbout
heh heh. cute!
6/23/2005 c1 18Kohari
COOL! This was totally ghetto.
6/14/2005 c1 Lollerskates
This most likely Happened!
2/6/2005 c1 pennycat
funny!
2/5/2005 c1 14Frosty Pig
A brand new look into Hiei, thats all I have to say ^_^
1/31/2005 c1 Black Flamingo
Yay! Another story! Once again, you had me laughing... laughing so hard that i started coughing! (i don't know if that's a good thing but..) Great stuff!
1/29/2005 c1 9D-chi
Thanks all for reviewing! I usually don't review my own stories, but since I can't post chapters that only consist of a author's note, this will have to do. Neko Makai, I'd just like to say that yes, I did put effort into this, but not the kind for a long story. I have several long stories that I'm going to post, but since it takes awhile to type everything that I wrote in my notebook, I'm posting the short stories first. To everyone else, sorry if you didn't like it, but I happen to like coming up with short, quirky, crazy little stories. I've never done drugs, for those that wanted to know. ^.^ Thanks for taking the time to check out my story, but it hurts my feelings when people are harsh on my stories that I took the time to post, however short they may be. Remember, be nice if you have to criticize, and be constructive reviewers. Happy reading!
1/27/2005 c1 5Neko Makai
Sorry I have to say this but I have to admit, this story is too short, and it makes less than an ounce of sense. You put no real effort into this story at all.
1/26/2005 c1 kawaii chibi shun
I think you have some slight problems. What exactly are you on? Whatever it is, the doseage should be WAY cut down. You are a pretty good writer. If only you chose to write things that made at least a teensy bit of sense. After all, if Hiei is from another planet, how did he get here?:P
1/26/2005 c1 cheese cubes of doom
that is a very good way at looking at Hiei's origins. you have a real talent for being funny, but u ain't funnier than me though. no offense. that was a real funny fanfiction. please make even funnier works in the future. laugh and be funny and cool all the time. awesome story once again.

-cheese cubes of doom
1/25/2005 c1 4Kyoy Valentine
Hey, like you said I am also a loyal reviewer. But then again I already knew this story before it was posted. Keep up the Great Writting!
1/25/2005 c1 kiarah
beautiful.
1/25/2005 c1 lone survivors
This is even better than the Bill Gates One! i'm laughing so hard, there are tears comming out of my eyes! you have a great talent for funny things

~lone survivor~
1/25/2005 c1 Blaphemus Monkey
It's ok... Kinda funny, but if hiei was from a diferent planet how did he get to earth?
1/25/2005 c1 4Ladyfox10
What the HELL are you on!

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