for Randomness5/25/2005 c5 me myself
i like it! 4 thumbs for you! (up thumbs that is) y'know what would be great? cows. lots of cows! anyhow, great job on the story!
i like it! 4 thumbs for you! (up thumbs that is) y'know what would be great? cows. lots of cows! anyhow, great job on the story!
2/13/2005 c5 
9D-chi
Hello, again! Okay, to Utena Himemiya and Red Rose Touga, I appologize. Yes, I felt stupid later when I realized I had more than one typo in the first chapter (more like about 3 typos). Still, I thought that I was more or less polite to you. Sorry for sounding so ticked off, but I was discouraged. I considered it to be a mild flame because I'm sensitive and take everything personally. Sorry, but that's just the way I am. Also, if you don't like my writing style, don't watse your time reading it. I won't think any less of you. Remember, I was still in middle school when I wrote this, so of course it's going to be a little immature. My writing style, save for a few select fanfics, is random, crazy, and often childish. I try to put humor into my fanfics. I personally think that they're funny, but I know that doesn't mean much, so I usually let someone else read it. My friend lked it, so I posted it. To respond to your comment about serious Utena fanfics, I don't LIKE serious Utena fics, so I won't write them. I'm sure both of yours are excellent, but that's not my bag, baby. ^.^;; Anyway, I know now that you weren't trying to be harsh, and neither am I. Just be a little more considerate and think about how it sounds to the author, who doesn't know what you're thinking, much less the connotation of your words. Besides, I can write serious fanfics like nobody's business, just not for Utena. Again, sorry. I wish you the best of luck and happiness in both of your writing careers. Thanks for expressing your thoughts. Ciao!
9D-chiHello, again! Okay, to Utena Himemiya and Red Rose Touga, I appologize. Yes, I felt stupid later when I realized I had more than one typo in the first chapter (more like about 3 typos). Still, I thought that I was more or less polite to you. Sorry for sounding so ticked off, but I was discouraged. I considered it to be a mild flame because I'm sensitive and take everything personally. Sorry, but that's just the way I am. Also, if you don't like my writing style, don't watse your time reading it. I won't think any less of you. Remember, I was still in middle school when I wrote this, so of course it's going to be a little immature. My writing style, save for a few select fanfics, is random, crazy, and often childish. I try to put humor into my fanfics. I personally think that they're funny, but I know that doesn't mean much, so I usually let someone else read it. My friend lked it, so I posted it. To respond to your comment about serious Utena fanfics, I don't LIKE serious Utena fics, so I won't write them. I'm sure both of yours are excellent, but that's not my bag, baby. ^.^;; Anyway, I know now that you weren't trying to be harsh, and neither am I. Just be a little more considerate and think about how it sounds to the author, who doesn't know what you're thinking, much less the connotation of your words. Besides, I can write serious fanfics like nobody's business, just not for Utena. Again, sorry. I wish you the best of luck and happiness in both of your writing careers. Thanks for expressing your thoughts. Ciao!
2/10/2005 c5 Musty
It was good!
It was good!
2/10/2005 c1 Utena Himemiya
This was certainly random. ^^;
When I saw the reviews, though, I noticed that you bashed Red Rose Touga. Even I noticed that you had spelling, grammatical and capitalization errors in this fanfic.
Do you both really have to be so rude to her. (Yes Red Touga Touga's real name is Anna Tailer, I read her fanfiction.)
Red Rose Touga is a very respected author in the Utena community, and her fics though they have so few chapters have over 100 reviews. You should read her fanfics, they are worth your time.
You have more then ONE typo. If you really want I can point them ALL out. You should get your things beta read, and after you both insulted her, she was nice enough to offer her assistance as a beta reader. She didn't write that it was good because if it has as many errors as it did, she wouldn't think it was good.
It's not her type of fanfic, I can tell by what she reads, because we have very similar taste. She likes IN CHARACTER SERIOUS fanfics, like Vulnerability, The Unspoken Heart, What He'd Die For, Longing, The Aftermath Saga, and things along that nature.
This is more to your random reader then to you. Red Rose Touga is not nit-picky, I know a reviewer that is, and his name is Ohtori Akio. And he will nit-pick you, because he's very harsh on fanfics, and he likes the same ones Red Rose Touga does. They are both elite fanfic writers who take their work seriously. There's too much crap here anyway, the crap clouds the good fanfiction.
Red Rose Touga DOES appreciate fanfiction, you should see her works, she's very talented. Don't knock a reviewer if you haven't read her works.
Go and read the story before you start saying such shameless things about the author.
As for your fanfic, I pretty much have the same opinion of it as she does. Now, I'm off to read what I've come here to read, that would be Vulnerability and Sweet Surrender.
This was certainly random. ^^;
When I saw the reviews, though, I noticed that you bashed Red Rose Touga. Even I noticed that you had spelling, grammatical and capitalization errors in this fanfic.
Do you both really have to be so rude to her. (Yes Red Touga Touga's real name is Anna Tailer, I read her fanfiction.)
Red Rose Touga is a very respected author in the Utena community, and her fics though they have so few chapters have over 100 reviews. You should read her fanfics, they are worth your time.
You have more then ONE typo. If you really want I can point them ALL out. You should get your things beta read, and after you both insulted her, she was nice enough to offer her assistance as a beta reader. She didn't write that it was good because if it has as many errors as it did, she wouldn't think it was good.
It's not her type of fanfic, I can tell by what she reads, because we have very similar taste. She likes IN CHARACTER SERIOUS fanfics, like Vulnerability, The Unspoken Heart, What He'd Die For, Longing, The Aftermath Saga, and things along that nature.
This is more to your random reader then to you. Red Rose Touga is not nit-picky, I know a reviewer that is, and his name is Ohtori Akio. And he will nit-pick you, because he's very harsh on fanfics, and he likes the same ones Red Rose Touga does. They are both elite fanfic writers who take their work seriously. There's too much crap here anyway, the crap clouds the good fanfiction.
Red Rose Touga DOES appreciate fanfiction, you should see her works, she's very talented. Don't knock a reviewer if you haven't read her works.
Go and read the story before you start saying such shameless things about the author.
As for your fanfic, I pretty much have the same opinion of it as she does. Now, I'm off to read what I've come here to read, that would be Vulnerability and Sweet Surrender.
2/10/2005 c5 Red Rose Touga
I'm too lazy to log in. I AM a beta reader, so grammer and character essence is what I live for and write.
For the type of fanfic it is, which is out of character senselessness, hence the name, randomness, it is good, if you like OOC fics. Everyone has their own personal favorites in fanfiction, I prefer authors like Oneesan no Miroku Houshi, Hinoto Nobukaze, Aishuu and Selenite1. They have a knack for good characterization, and they, like myself, write good Utena fanfiction and get plenty of reviews for our characterization and grip on the series and characters in general.
Grammer and word structure is good in any fanfic. I wasn't being harsh by my review, I was simply saying that you need a beta reader. Some authors should learn the difference from "Constructive critisism" and "Flames/insults" I was simply critisizing your work, that's all.
I hardly read fanfiction on , except by those authors and the ones in my C2 Community for Utena, which only has the best fanfiction for this series.
Chapter 1 wasn't the only thing that had errors.
I'm a stiff reviewer, that's just how I am. I even have high expectation for my own works. So, sorry if I offend you by my critisism, but it's what I think, and that's what reviews are for, isn't it?
I'm too lazy to log in. I AM a beta reader, so grammer and character essence is what I live for and write.
For the type of fanfic it is, which is out of character senselessness, hence the name, randomness, it is good, if you like OOC fics. Everyone has their own personal favorites in fanfiction, I prefer authors like Oneesan no Miroku Houshi, Hinoto Nobukaze, Aishuu and Selenite1. They have a knack for good characterization, and they, like myself, write good Utena fanfiction and get plenty of reviews for our characterization and grip on the series and characters in general.
Grammer and word structure is good in any fanfic. I wasn't being harsh by my review, I was simply saying that you need a beta reader. Some authors should learn the difference from "Constructive critisism" and "Flames/insults" I was simply critisizing your work, that's all.
I hardly read fanfiction on , except by those authors and the ones in my C2 Community for Utena, which only has the best fanfiction for this series.
Chapter 1 wasn't the only thing that had errors.
I'm a stiff reviewer, that's just how I am. I even have high expectation for my own works. So, sorry if I offend you by my critisism, but it's what I think, and that's what reviews are for, isn't it?
12/5/2004 c1 A random reader
Please don't be sad...your fic made me go like this: O.o = o.O = @.@ = ^_^
Have fun! If you enjoy writing, then I'm sure that many will enjoy reading your work. Some people can be unfairly nitpicky...don't worry too much about it-but checking over spelling and grammar/continuity etc. before posting helps out your "loyal readers" too...I think that with your very sweet attitude and willingness to accept criticism, you deserve to have a legion of supporters. Just keep up the great work ethic and don't let people who don't even know you or appreciate what you do ever get you down, 'kay?
Thank you
Please don't be sad...your fic made me go like this: O.o = o.O = @.@ = ^_^
Have fun! If you enjoy writing, then I'm sure that many will enjoy reading your work. Some people can be unfairly nitpicky...don't worry too much about it-but checking over spelling and grammar/continuity etc. before posting helps out your "loyal readers" too...I think that with your very sweet attitude and willingness to accept criticism, you deserve to have a legion of supporters. Just keep up the great work ethic and don't let people who don't even know you or appreciate what you do ever get you down, 'kay?
Thank you
12/1/2004 c1 9D-chi
Yeah, I know it's sad that I'm reviewing, but I felt I had to say something. Red Rose Touga, I appreciate your concern, but could you be a little kinder? I had ONE typo, a typo that I thought I had fixed, but must've made a mistake on. I appologize for my imperfection. You could at least say, "but the rest was okay". You know what I mean? Well, whatever. You review how you think you should, but at least try to point out the positive as well as the negative (in a constructive way, not destructive and discouraging). At any rate, thanks for reviewing. I'll do my best to fix my mistakes.
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9D-chiYeah, I know it's sad that I'm reviewing, but I felt I had to say something. Red Rose Touga, I appreciate your concern, but could you be a little kinder? I had ONE typo, a typo that I thought I had fixed, but must've made a mistake on. I appologize for my imperfection. You could at least say, "but the rest was okay". You know what I mean? Well, whatever. You review how you think you should, but at least try to point out the positive as well as the negative (in a constructive way, not destructive and discouraging). At any rate, thanks for reviewing. I'll do my best to fix my mistakes.
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