for Fire's Child8/4/2008 c12 Ellie
wow, this is really good! I think youre a really good author. please continue the fic!
wow, this is really good! I think youre a really good author. please continue the fic!
4/30/2006 c1 
1TF22
Great story! It beats mine by a long shot!
Um, I started a Fan-Fic (only the prologue's up. God I can suck!) then I searched to see if anyone had one like mine. One did so I think 'Aww dammit!' I R&R, look at other reviews and find out yours is like the one that mine's like.
Yeah, I gave Jak a hidden sister too. But she's a younger one.
Sorry if it looks like I copied or anything!
1TF22Great story! It beats mine by a long shot!
Um, I started a Fan-Fic (only the prologue's up. God I can suck!) then I searched to see if anyone had one like mine. One did so I think 'Aww dammit!' I R&R, look at other reviews and find out yours is like the one that mine's like.
Yeah, I gave Jak a hidden sister too. But she's a younger one.
Sorry if it looks like I copied or anything!
1/29/2006 c12 Silver-WindScar
Now that, was sad...and dramatic. Also, how could she say Jak is corrupted? He's resisted the Darkness time and time again! Jay ain't even seen his 'dark side' in a manner of speaking. Nice chapters, keep it up and please, for the love of all that keeps the world revolving (and rotating), update soon. ;)
Now that, was sad...and dramatic. Also, how could she say Jak is corrupted? He's resisted the Darkness time and time again! Jay ain't even seen his 'dark side' in a manner of speaking. Nice chapters, keep it up and please, for the love of all that keeps the world revolving (and rotating), update soon. ;)
12/9/2005 c1 Dragonslegend86
So cool I have read all of it. I'm glad to see that the other eco was also included. (Feel sorry for characters though.)
So cool I have read all of it. I'm glad to see that the other eco was also included. (Feel sorry for characters though.)
12/9/2005 c12 jaklover123
((sorry, computer won't let me log in)) wow, she does have a dark past doesn't she? strong girl to be able to keep going after all that. :nodnod: well, hope to see chapter 13 soon! XD
((sorry, computer won't let me log in)) wow, she does have a dark past doesn't she? strong girl to be able to keep going after all that. :nodnod: well, hope to see chapter 13 soon! XD
11/23/2005 c11 LunarSquirrel
^_^ Well done! A new, different plotline taking things ina new direction, I really enjoyed it. Update soon!
^_^ Well done! A new, different plotline taking things ina new direction, I really enjoyed it. Update soon!
11/23/2005 c11 jaklover123
yay! chapter 11! and it was really good! though there were some spelling mistakes, but now there's a nother eco dude! though, i wander why torn's suddenly interested in them. well, hope the next chapter doesn't take as long! until then!
yay! chapter 11! and it was really good! though there were some spelling mistakes, but now there's a nother eco dude! though, i wander why torn's suddenly interested in them. well, hope the next chapter doesn't take as long! until then!
11/20/2005 c11 40Hawkeye116
That;s good to know. But you must also know that your fic can be removed coz of a chapter as an author note. Just warning you.
40Hawkeye116That;s good to know. But you must also know that your fic can be removed coz of a chapter as an author note. Just warning you.
1/23/2005 c10 5Ekobean
Hoorah! Sorry it took me so long to update babe, I've been busy. Great chapter but you MUST UPDATE! Please?
5EkobeanHoorah! Sorry it took me so long to update babe, I've been busy. Great chapter but you MUST UPDATE! Please?
1/9/2005 c10 9Samsonic1991
Pretty good work, Shady. Oh, and by the way, yes, my name DID used to be Dark Eco Freak. I just changed it. Well, good work! Keep it up.
9Samsonic1991Pretty good work, Shady. Oh, and by the way, yes, my name DID used to be Dark Eco Freak. I just changed it. Well, good work! Keep it up.
1/3/2005 c10 40Hawkeye116
YAY CHAPPIE TEN! That was awesomeness, good job! I only noticed two typos besides the thing with the dialogue.
Hmm, our dear Mr. Ekobean hasn't emailed me back yet about my pov. Have you received any emails? He's probably buzy with homework and his own pov, if I know him well enough.
GUESS WHAT! Today was pretty lax, and they handed out Progress Reports, and I got an A+ in History, Spanish, and English, and an A in Science and Algebra. I am oh so proud of my grades, and nothing shall bring me down! NOTHING! MWAHAHA!
Sorry I didn't review earlier, but I apparently never got an author alert message from here, coz apparently not only were my author alerts disabled, but my review alerts and my c2 alerts as well. Now, I know for a fact I didn't turn them off... And I also know there's spyware on the computer in the kitchen. Just in case, I changed my password and I will avoid logging on, on that computer. I wonder how that happened with my alerts turning off... *Ominous music and suspicious look*
Anyway, adios, good chappie, and I look forward to chappie 11.
~Me
PS- Do you not like Keira and Ashelin or something? Or do you view their appearance or personalities as 'bovine'? Just curious. ;)
40Hawkeye116YAY CHAPPIE TEN! That was awesomeness, good job! I only noticed two typos besides the thing with the dialogue.
Hmm, our dear Mr. Ekobean hasn't emailed me back yet about my pov. Have you received any emails? He's probably buzy with homework and his own pov, if I know him well enough.
GUESS WHAT! Today was pretty lax, and they handed out Progress Reports, and I got an A+ in History, Spanish, and English, and an A in Science and Algebra. I am oh so proud of my grades, and nothing shall bring me down! NOTHING! MWAHAHA!
Sorry I didn't review earlier, but I apparently never got an author alert message from here, coz apparently not only were my author alerts disabled, but my review alerts and my c2 alerts as well. Now, I know for a fact I didn't turn them off... And I also know there's spyware on the computer in the kitchen. Just in case, I changed my password and I will avoid logging on, on that computer. I wonder how that happened with my alerts turning off... *Ominous music and suspicious look*
Anyway, adios, good chappie, and I look forward to chappie 11.
~Me
PS- Do you not like Keira and Ashelin or something? Or do you view their appearance or personalities as 'bovine'? Just curious. ;)
1/2/2005 c10 4Lenipez sideshow
hm...mystery green eco man Who is were did he come from? we may never know unless you update...do that eventualy pleas ^_^
-the lenipezsideshow!
4Lenipez sideshowhm...mystery green eco man Who is were did he come from? we may never know unless you update...do that eventualy pleas ^_^
-the lenipezsideshow!
12/25/2004 c9 4Lenipez sideshow
happy winter time ^_^
Clue:doesb't winter usualt implie snow...i don't see none..and we are in main..
=( yup no sno *cries*
that joke was so random it was funny. thats somthing my dad would do... o.O
mr. red eco huh? what does torn want with the eco experimentS? hmm i ponder..OW
CLue: watch out don't hurt yourself... no one ever notices leni unless she's hyperactive so they all think she's a spaz...but then the rest of the time shes practicaly silent...if only she'd never speak to me again.
*hugs* i love you too!
up date soon, may your muses be more helpful than this reveiw.
-Lenipez sideshow
4Lenipez sideshowhappy winter time ^_^
Clue:doesb't winter usualt implie snow...i don't see none..and we are in main..
=( yup no sno *cries*
that joke was so random it was funny. thats somthing my dad would do... o.O
mr. red eco huh? what does torn want with the eco experimentS? hmm i ponder..OW
CLue: watch out don't hurt yourself... no one ever notices leni unless she's hyperactive so they all think she's a spaz...but then the rest of the time shes practicaly silent...if only she'd never speak to me again.
*hugs* i love you too!
up date soon, may your muses be more helpful than this reveiw.
-Lenipez sideshow
