4/6/2010 c1 32ShanoaWarrior
I like your story, very romantic! I think Ryu and Nina are the perfect couple :)

6/22/2005 c1 3Lexik
I read this a while back.. At first, I didn't think of it as anything special, but the later parts left a warm impression; not anything I really thought of though. Then, I was just thinking earlier today, found my mind drifted into fanfics, and your story seemed to stick out. Looking at your work again, I'm very touched... It's really hit home for me. Little things just stick out, small - almost invisible - tweaks:

Fish boy "helped himself to our purses" /

"You later told me that you thought that I never seemed to run out of energy. I had no idea what you were talking about... still don’t... Hey! You don’t think that I talk too much, do you?" /

The whole take on the song, the coma, and inflicting bishi abuse on Ryu: love this the most. Amusing, but easy to throw in a more angsty category. But yeah, first time with the song here really set the personality you gave. /

There are a few others... Anyway, your intro could use work and the instant crush deal left a bad taste. Overall, congrats on holding the attention of someone who rolls her eyes at then skips past fluff with zero interest and hopes for a minus romance search option.

12/3/2004 c1 23Macross-Green
Damn, now that was sweet. Not cavity-inducing sweet, but up there. In a good way, no less. Nicely written!