for Hellsing: A New Child4/15/2007 c1 Sir Deadpool
i hope you make 1 with the leztez battalion in it would be amazing if you did
i hope you make 1 with the leztez battalion in it would be amazing if you did
2/26/2007 c30 
1Edowen
This story rocks. I love it. I haven't read something this good in... well ever. I hope you contiune to write stories. They are good. Thanks for writing. See you on the dark side
1EdowenThis story rocks. I love it. I haven't read something this good in... well ever. I hope you contiune to write stories. They are good. Thanks for writing. See you on the dark side
6/24/2006 c1 Billy
I want to be a vampire! e! Super story!
I want to be a vampire! e! Super story!
10/4/2005 c30 Dagger Kitsune
I like this story for three reasons 1. It is a diffrent plot, 2. It is OC that feels like he was or is part of the anime/manga and 3. I liked how you kepted the characters from the anime/manga in character.
Great job!
Dagger1211
I like this story for three reasons 1. It is a diffrent plot, 2. It is OC that feels like he was or is part of the anime/manga and 3. I liked how you kepted the characters from the anime/manga in character.
Great job!
Dagger1211
7/25/2005 c1 7Jaden Halcyon
Love it, of course I read it when it was in it's planning stages! *smiles*
7Jaden HalcyonLove it, of course I read it when it was in it's planning stages! *smiles*
12/16/2004 c30 10Liquid-Goddess-Reformation
Hi! I just finished reading your fic and I'm planning on starting the sequel. First I'd like to say it was well thought-out and easily read by your average fiction fanatic (like me ^-^!) I really liked how you portrayed Seras Victoria; I always think of her as being a really nice person and I think you must have a similar idea.
I do have some constructive though.
I know you mentioned it in the notes, but I think the way you stuck Alex in their wasn't so great. Don't get me wrong, the fact you put him in their at all makes me love you (I know I'm generalizing, but alot of hellsing fans tend to stick him in the background and ignore him; I'm an Alex fan so I get a little sad about this -_-),
I agree that he would work with Hellsing, especially because his organization made him, but I think they'd use Maxwell to contact first, and then Alex wouldn't really talk to them much, and call them "Vampire", or "beast of Darkness" of somehting equally demeaning. Just smething to keep in mind.
I'vealso go to say that I think he seemed to almost give SERAS orders. I don't know, it just might be that I think he should have been a little less sure about himself when It came to guns, fighting, and giving orders, and if theirs a reason for that, I think you should say why; just something to keep in mind.
Either way, it's nothing major and it all comes down to taste anyways. I think you did a really good job, and you did do a good job in staying in character (minus Anderson, but I've already explained about that.) I you wouldn't mind, I'd be cool if you read my fan fiction and gave me a review; if you have time.
Anyways, if you don't like long reviews sorry, if you do, your welcome! I'm off to read the sequal! Chao!
10Liquid-Goddess-ReformationHi! I just finished reading your fic and I'm planning on starting the sequel. First I'd like to say it was well thought-out and easily read by your average fiction fanatic (like me ^-^!) I really liked how you portrayed Seras Victoria; I always think of her as being a really nice person and I think you must have a similar idea.
I do have some constructive though.
I know you mentioned it in the notes, but I think the way you stuck Alex in their wasn't so great. Don't get me wrong, the fact you put him in their at all makes me love you (I know I'm generalizing, but alot of hellsing fans tend to stick him in the background and ignore him; I'm an Alex fan so I get a little sad about this -_-),
I agree that he would work with Hellsing, especially because his organization made him, but I think they'd use Maxwell to contact first, and then Alex wouldn't really talk to them much, and call them "Vampire", or "beast of Darkness" of somehting equally demeaning. Just smething to keep in mind.
I'vealso go to say that I think he seemed to almost give SERAS orders. I don't know, it just might be that I think he should have been a little less sure about himself when It came to guns, fighting, and giving orders, and if theirs a reason for that, I think you should say why; just something to keep in mind.
Either way, it's nothing major and it all comes down to taste anyways. I think you did a really good job, and you did do a good job in staying in character (minus Anderson, but I've already explained about that.) I you wouldn't mind, I'd be cool if you read my fan fiction and gave me a review; if you have time.
Anyways, if you don't like long reviews sorry, if you do, your welcome! I'm off to read the sequal! Chao!
11/14/2004 c30 1Zahut-um
Good idea and a rather good fic. I see why you didn't put too much Integral conversations, the same reason for not describing Alucard too much. It's diffucult to keep them IC (In character).
The only thing that bothers me is Anderson. He is a little too friendly towards them. Even if God himself would order him to help the vampires he would still feel reluctant about and despise them. Kyuuketsuki are still profane beings that shame God only by existing.
Settum
1Zahut-umGood idea and a rather good fic. I see why you didn't put too much Integral conversations, the same reason for not describing Alucard too much. It's diffucult to keep them IC (In character).
The only thing that bothers me is Anderson. He is a little too friendly towards them. Even if God himself would order him to help the vampires he would still feel reluctant about and despise them. Kyuuketsuki are still profane beings that shame God only by existing.
Settum
3/29/2004 c29 2Hope Loneheart
wow this is a varey good fanfic i liked it alot but if you could add more on to it that would be grat
2Hope Loneheartwow this is a varey good fanfic i liked it alot but if you could add more on to it that would be grat
3/23/2004 c23 3Chaos Blade
Good fic.
The story seems interesting enough, though I'd rather read the whole thing before giving a good review.
3Chaos BladeGood fic.
The story seems interesting enough, though I'd rather read the whole thing before giving a good review.
3/18/2004 c19 15NickNova
Pretty good. Chapters are on the short side. Your not giving enough visual detail, Not enough Alucard scenes or action. Grammar is good, the relationship between Seres and Matt is good. WHERE THE HELL is our favorite vampire killing priest?
15NickNovaPretty good. Chapters are on the short side. Your not giving enough visual detail, Not enough Alucard scenes or action. Grammar is good, the relationship between Seres and Matt is good. WHERE THE HELL is our favorite vampire killing priest?
3/12/2004 c13 5the son of duress
interesting addition of a new vampire to hellsing. although he is a little too...human. i dont know what it is, but the easy way he gets on with Walter and saving the soldier, and killing all those ghouls. He is a little too saint-like. Everyone likes a flawed character. But these are only suggestions, feel free to ignore me...
5the son of duressinteresting addition of a new vampire to hellsing. although he is a little too...human. i dont know what it is, but the easy way he gets on with Walter and saving the soldier, and killing all those ghouls. He is a little too saint-like. Everyone likes a flawed character. But these are only suggestions, feel free to ignore me...
