for The Life Fate Wanted9/1 c12 Guest
Please finish the story I like the story it gets better and better can’t wait to see what happens next to the story
Please finish the story I like the story it gets better and better can’t wait to see what happens next to the story
9/1 c12 
13fictionalmike
Continuing excellence in story-telling. I am enjoying this story, combining new marriage with overseas posting and adoption. Three stressful situations for our favourite Dynamic Duo. More, please.
13fictionalmikeContinuing excellence in story-telling. I am enjoying this story, combining new marriage with overseas posting and adoption. Three stressful situations for our favourite Dynamic Duo. More, please.
8/28 c12 Ros
Loving this story
Loving this story
8/27 c12 Steamboat
Excellent chapter! Good meeting with his command. I'm enjoying reading your story and look forward to each new installment.
Excellent chapter! Good meeting with his command. I'm enjoying reading your story and look forward to each new installment.
8/27 c12 Guest
Excellent writing and I hope you keep writing it
Excellent writing and I hope you keep writing it
8/27 c12 Guest
WOW, good couple of chapters I caught up on. LOTS of good drama. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
WOW, good couple of chapters I caught up on. LOTS of good drama. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
8/16 c11 Guest
Really loving this story. I just wish that Harm would realise Mac & his family are more important than his flying. He’s always put flying before anyone he’s cared for, it is good that he’s staring to realise what this means to those he loves. Looking forward to updates.
Really loving this story. I just wish that Harm would realise Mac & his family are more important than his flying. He’s always put flying before anyone he’s cared for, it is good that he’s staring to realise what this means to those he loves. Looking forward to updates.
8/11 c11 Hazmatt
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! Very emotional! I look forward to reading more! I hope everything works out!
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! Very emotional! I look forward to reading more! I hope everything works out!
8/11 c11 JAG'ed Bones in the Casckett
that was a really strong chapter I love how you had them address their issues keep up the great work
that was a really strong chapter I love how you had them address their issues keep up the great work
7/22 c10 Guest
Thumbs up on the story so far. Hope this doesn't get too dark and does have a happy ending. I will be looking for your next update.
Thumbs up on the story so far. Hope this doesn't get too dark and does have a happy ending. I will be looking for your next update.
