for Hidden secret2/4 c1 
75Tower of Babel
It has promise, but you really need to work on your punctuation and grammar. Also, when you're expressing POV, instead of actually saying POV of a particular character, why not just put a line in between paragraphs for the POV. It would be much easier to read. Overall, I liked your story.
75Tower of BabelIt has promise, but you really need to work on your punctuation and grammar. Also, when you're expressing POV, instead of actually saying POV of a particular character, why not just put a line in between paragraphs for the POV. It would be much easier to read. Overall, I liked your story.
