for Wandering the stars5/2 c6 SebjectCrimsonStorm
Right now the only flaw I can see in this is the Berlin Wall of text, seriously break the giant paragraphs down a bit
Right now the only flaw I can see in this is the Berlin Wall of text, seriously break the giant paragraphs down a bit
4/24 c9 
3Sm0keyPanda
I greatly respect the decision to have Oz delete the recordings. It's the right thing.
3Sm0keyPandaI greatly respect the decision to have Oz delete the recordings. It's the right thing.
2/7 c6 4Death300043
I like this, you've earned a follow and a favorite. But please work on the 'wall of text' it's very hard and tiring to read.
4Death300043I like this, you've earned a follow and a favorite. But please work on the 'wall of text' it's very hard and tiring to read.
12/30/2019 c6 kaberial
Second verse same as the first. "SPACING"
Spent like 10 mins reading the first block, because I keep losing my place.
Second verse same as the first. "SPACING"
Spent like 10 mins reading the first block, because I keep losing my place.
12/18/2019 c5 kaberial
Story is good and all, but chapter 4...need some spacing. It was hard to read, but otherwise kind of like the concept so far.
Story is good and all, but chapter 4...need some spacing. It was hard to read, but otherwise kind of like the concept so far.
