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9/13 c6 4My Father's Daughter
Started reading and reviewing this on Ao3 but ended up finishing it here after switching devices. What a satisfying read! I loved the simple yet sweet slice-of-life style, the refreshingly pure romance, the wholesome moments, and the wealth of life lessons and practical wisdom.

I’m a sucker for when the couple starts off as friends and gradually builds up trust, even though that ironically tends to make me impatient too because of how long it can take; but I think you managed to sidestep that issue completely by having excellent pacing! It’s nice to read a Naruto fic that covers the main timeline WITHOUT taking as long as the show itself does. Yours was well fleshed out and yet still sweetly succinct.

In short, great job, and thank you for writing this story!

P.S. Are you familiar with the KonMari method from Japanese decluttering expert, Marie Kondo? Because your MC is pretty much her reincarnated into the world of Konoha, bahaha. Naoki should host a podcast or write a book, or something. “The AkaNao Method: How To Go From Homemaker To Hokage” X-D
8/11 c6 WhiteVolder
Отличная история. Я очень рад, что прочитал ее. Желаю вам всего самого наилучшего!)
8/6 c6 4TDI-Ryro-Eclares
Loved this!
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8/1 c6 1Iuvenis Astra
Ugh, I absolutely loved this. Especially the part where she passionately spoke to Kakashi about wanting Konoha to have beautiful parks and help people directly instead of always doing combat missions. It was very interesting that she wanted Konoha to be the prettiest hidden village instead of the first hidden village.
7/30 c6 15jully123
I've gotta say this is the second time I'm reading this and it's just as beautiful as the first. I really wish there were more stories like this one with that slice-of-life/world-building vibe. I only wish it were longer but the ending still feels perfect.
7/26 c6 WinterEveOrchid
wow this story is incredible, it shows a different side of the ninja world and a very interesting take on the civilian life and politics. Great plot, characters and storytelling, keep up the good work!
7/21 c6 snowblackxx
Wonderful. That was amazing. I love the plot, the characters are well written, your writing style is amazing and im just absolutely happy i read this story.
7/17 c6 123
Beautiful
7/13 c6 guest
Such a great story!
7/12 c6 10PepperonyOwl
I keep re reading this it is just so awesome. fantastic, great awesome work. Love the whole society cultural background development, Fantastic job, thanks for sharing
7/11 c6 Guest
The fic I didn't know I needed. The relationship between Sasuke and Naoki was beautiful and it was lovely seeing him being taken under her wing. I like reading about your OC and the new perspective she brought as a civilian. Her relationship with Kakashi didn't go the way I thought it'd go but lovely to read nonetheless with how he gradually opens up to her.
6/25 c6 Cake Bird
This was an incredibly satisfying and thoughtful fic to read. I should have written a review for every chapter, if only to really show you my appreciation, but I rarely remember to write reviews so I hope this one will accurately express my happiness at having gotten the chance to read this fic. Personally, these are my favorite types of fics to read. In the naruto world, I find that most endings for the characters that we were presented lacked the necessary thought and closure. I love the transformative effects of Naoki and all the relationships in this fic. Her dimension, strength, and actions as a homemaker were especially beautiful and it really shows how these emotionally stunted overgrown child soldiers needed some positive civilian influences in their lives lol. Thanks for writing this fic even though I cried at the end because I’m an emotional wreck. I am currently going on a binge of all your works and hope that you are happy and safe during these times!
6/16 c6 Wingweaver1661
I never know what to say in a review but I just wanted to let you know that this was amazing and I loved it!
6/3 c1 Saphira113
I don't think there are enough words for how much I love this story. Your portrayal of women using politics to their advantage is unparalleled no matter which Fandom you are writing for at the time.
Homes are important and this story really shows that. It also has an interesting take on the relationship between civilians and shinobi.
5/31 c6 6Raven-Croven
This whole story was beautiful to witness unfold. Thank you.
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