for The Star guardian and her Darkin8/31 c8 Guest
I love this story so much
I love this story so much
8/29 c8 Redpodjellybeans
I did not expect to enjoy this story this much! Ty author, i look forward to more :D
I did not expect to enjoy this story this much! Ty author, i look forward to more :D
11/20/2019 c4 Guest
Will you update?
Will you update?
5/14/2019 c4 Exoted
Its soooooo good i need more
Its soooooo good i need more
2/23/2019 c4 
4Anthropomancy
To be honest this chapter felt a bit rushed. You jumped straight from his back story into a giant fight, into him taking control, dying, but revealing his powerful regeneration abilities, into another confrontation to the other star guardians. The fight definitely could have been more detailed. Finally, there are some typos and simple grammar mistakes that you can easily fix by re-reading it. What you did well was keeping all the characters. . . in character. Aatrox is full of hate and would take any chance to kill, and Lux would seem like the type of person to want to give him a chance.
4AnthropomancyTo be honest this chapter felt a bit rushed. You jumped straight from his back story into a giant fight, into him taking control, dying, but revealing his powerful regeneration abilities, into another confrontation to the other star guardians. The fight definitely could have been more detailed. Finally, there are some typos and simple grammar mistakes that you can easily fix by re-reading it. What you did well was keeping all the characters. . . in character. Aatrox is full of hate and would take any chance to kill, and Lux would seem like the type of person to want to give him a chance.
2/16/2019 c4 Alpuck729
Amazing! hope to see more of this in the future!
Amazing! hope to see more of this in the future!
2/10/2019 c4 DarthBicanCZ
So far i love the story. It's really interesting and I hope there will be more chapters
So far i love the story. It's really interesting and I hope there will be more chapters
1/20/2019 c3 Anthropomancy
I really like the new Aatrox lore, and while this wasn't what I imagined stories about him to be, it's done a decent job so far. You nailed his character pretty well. He's full of hate, but if you look at some of his quotes when enemies flash masteries, he also has a good appreciation for humor as well. Hope to see more soon.
I really like the new Aatrox lore, and while this wasn't what I imagined stories about him to be, it's done a decent job so far. You nailed his character pretty well. He's full of hate, but if you look at some of his quotes when enemies flash masteries, he also has a good appreciation for humor as well. Hope to see more soon.
