for Me, A Goblin?8/24 c19 Guest
Yep trash
Yep trash
8/24 c18 Guest
Trash
Trash
8/24 c17 Guest
Yeah beta Mc that has someone take over his body randomly this is a trash fanfic lol how did you ever think this was good? How could someone write so much of trash
Yeah beta Mc that has someone take over his body randomly this is a trash fanfic lol how did you ever think this was good? How could someone write so much of trash
8/24 c13 Guest
Yep sucks
Yep sucks
8/24 c12 Guest
The voice again. Trash
The voice again. Trash
8/24 c10 Guest
If he joins her then you made a 0/5 fanfic lol
If he joins her then you made a 0/5 fanfic lol
8/24 c6 Guest
My god this story is f*cking awful. Waste of time
My god this story is f*cking awful. Waste of time
8/24 c2 Guest
If you didn’t have that “voice” that is in italics then this fanfic could be good but just that part ruined this entire fanfic 1.5/5
If you didn’t have that “voice” that is in italics then this fanfic could be good but just that part ruined this entire fanfic 1.5/5
8/15 c29 
2Skullcrusher1234
This guys a weird mix between naruto,emiya,and The goblin slayer and I hate it.
2Skullcrusher1234This guys a weird mix between naruto,emiya,and The goblin slayer and I hate it.
7/24 c29 TitanGuest912
The people leaving all of these nonsensical reviews, know nothing of what you have in mind for this story. Chapter by chapter I see the human stuck in a goblin's body grow in character. We even see another goblin who might be strangely similar to our protagonist
Keep doing what you are doing! Do not mind the foolish people who skim your work and then dare to even leave a review as if they have even understood what the story is about.
Can't wait for more! It has been a very creative journey so far 3
The people leaving all of these nonsensical reviews, know nothing of what you have in mind for this story. Chapter by chapter I see the human stuck in a goblin's body grow in character. We even see another goblin who might be strangely similar to our protagonist
Keep doing what you are doing! Do not mind the foolish people who skim your work and then dare to even leave a review as if they have even understood what the story is about.
Can't wait for more! It has been a very creative journey so far 3
7/18 c29 ADAZ99
It is dark. I like it. I like the first person point of view, you make it works well in this story. Thanks for the read.
It is dark. I like it. I like the first person point of view, you make it works well in this story. Thanks for the read.
7/7 c7 Guest
I skimmed, kept skimming, and skimmed some more. Hoping, beyond hope it seems; that you would finally pull your head out of your rectum and start writing the story instead of waxing poetic on a nostalgia trip. At no point have you once in these seven farces so far even tried to tell a story. It's all, without exception, introspection and very little interaction with the world. I literally was able to skim past entire chapters that could be summed up in single paragraphs.
I... just... seriously. You're obviously literate, but you write like you've never read an actual story. Somehow, apparently the rest of world is not aware of just how little culture is allowed to enter your island country. Because the only thing that I can think of to excuse this mess, is the fact that your homeland is Australia, the land of restricted content right behind North Korea. That is to say, it's not a good thing when the only way to speak good about your country's external media policy is to compare it to either China or North Korea, and declare that at least it's not one of those two.
Ugh, whatever, that was a half hour wasted, hoping in vain that you'd start telling a story instead of writing rambling thoughts. I'm out, forget the peace.
I skimmed, kept skimming, and skimmed some more. Hoping, beyond hope it seems; that you would finally pull your head out of your rectum and start writing the story instead of waxing poetic on a nostalgia trip. At no point have you once in these seven farces so far even tried to tell a story. It's all, without exception, introspection and very little interaction with the world. I literally was able to skim past entire chapters that could be summed up in single paragraphs.
I... just... seriously. You're obviously literate, but you write like you've never read an actual story. Somehow, apparently the rest of world is not aware of just how little culture is allowed to enter your island country. Because the only thing that I can think of to excuse this mess, is the fact that your homeland is Australia, the land of restricted content right behind North Korea. That is to say, it's not a good thing when the only way to speak good about your country's external media policy is to compare it to either China or North Korea, and declare that at least it's not one of those two.
Ugh, whatever, that was a half hour wasted, hoping in vain that you'd start telling a story instead of writing rambling thoughts. I'm out, forget the peace.
6/15 c29 jjjmmm009
In every story, there are three elements that make it good. Conflict, Struggle and Catharsis.
Conflict and Struggle are the ones that make the story interesting and not boring. A protagonist that struggles is a reflection of real life afterall.
Catharsis provides relief to the stress of the story is something that is often misunderstood and forgotten. It's not the jokes or humor that breaks the ice that makes the catharsis, but the partial or satisfying conclusion of the conflict.
Your story severely lacks catharsis. Every moment is just struggle with no end that just builds up and up until it's no longer interesting to read. There's nothing going right for him and he always fail. The protagonist is really pathetic that no one could relate.
In every story, there are three elements that make it good. Conflict, Struggle and Catharsis.
Conflict and Struggle are the ones that make the story interesting and not boring. A protagonist that struggles is a reflection of real life afterall.
Catharsis provides relief to the stress of the story is something that is often misunderstood and forgotten. It's not the jokes or humor that breaks the ice that makes the catharsis, but the partial or satisfying conclusion of the conflict.
Your story severely lacks catharsis. Every moment is just struggle with no end that just builds up and up until it's no longer interesting to read. There's nothing going right for him and he always fail. The protagonist is really pathetic that no one could relate.
