for The Quicksilver Kids1/23 c1 
60Mrotrax
This is the start of something great, I can feel it!
Look very forward to how this changes things
60MrotraxThis is the start of something great, I can feel it!
Look very forward to how this changes things
7/29/2019 c4 FT
Next chapter please I like this story a lot.
Next chapter please I like this story a lot.
3/29/2019 c4 Watcher of ways
Well now you've done it, i'm hooked and there ain't any more chapters...please put more up soon, i actually wanna know how these kids turn out...and i wouldn't mind if we wind up with a alternate timeline in which pyrrha and penny are both alive and well for their future.
Well now you've done it, i'm hooked and there ain't any more chapters...please put more up soon, i actually wanna know how these kids turn out...and i wouldn't mind if we wind up with a alternate timeline in which pyrrha and penny are both alive and well for their future.
1/25/2019 c4 Majisk
Guess it was great while it lasted. Really hoped there could be more but I really enjoyed it none the less
Guess it was great while it lasted. Really hoped there could be more but I really enjoyed it none the less
1/21/2019 c4 3stardustdreamseiya
Please Please Please keep working on this story it's so goood! I sincerely hope you keep updating.
3stardustdreamseiyaPlease Please Please keep working on this story it's so goood! I sincerely hope you keep updating.
12/23/2018 c1 Zera Of The Damned
Don't know about anyone else but I'd probably just leave the building if I were ever in this situation. I'm not the woman they know, or WILL know for a very, very, very long time.
Plus afterwards I'd just short circuit for a while.
And then the anxiety attack would settle in and with that comes a whole new slew of problems...
Don't know about anyone else but I'd probably just leave the building if I were ever in this situation. I'm not the woman they know, or WILL know for a very, very, very long time.
Plus afterwards I'd just short circuit for a while.
And then the anxiety attack would settle in and with that comes a whole new slew of problems...
12/6/2018 c4 9Willowth'Wisp
Aww, what a cute story! Is this like...Wilted, except it deviated into their OTHER love story because their kids popped up? XD I love all the personalities of the kids, by the way. Eirian is adorable and I absolutely adore her twin red buns tied with the long silver ribbons. XP
9Willowth'WispAww, what a cute story! Is this like...Wilted, except it deviated into their OTHER love story because their kids popped up? XD I love all the personalities of the kids, by the way. Eirian is adorable and I absolutely adore her twin red buns tied with the long silver ribbons. XP
11/21/2018 c4 2GrimmDzzzy
Ok, I'm loving this.
The Rose-Black siblings dynamic is on POINT!
I so checked Ruby x Mercury, there's 50 or so including yours but I think it's actually 40.
2GrimmDzzzyOk, I'm loving this.
The Rose-Black siblings dynamic is on POINT!
I so checked Ruby x Mercury, there's 50 or so including yours but I think it's actually 40.
10/31/2018 c1 I'm on chp 4
So sorry I accidentally hit the post button before I was done. aside from the misgivings from the previous review I really enjoyed this fic and can understand you writing it for stress relief, (I may or may not have stayed up till past midnight reading it) and since you do art stuff you should draw the Quicksilver Kiddos (preferably the one with the kaftan cause I have wo idea what that thing is).
So sorry I accidentally hit the post button before I was done. aside from the misgivings from the previous review I really enjoyed this fic and can understand you writing it for stress relief, (I may or may not have stayed up till past midnight reading it) and since you do art stuff you should draw the Quicksilver Kiddos (preferably the one with the kaftan cause I have wo idea what that thing is).
10/31/2018 c4 I'm on chp 4
I know Mercury and co probably won't remember this (most likely something at the end of the fic) but I hope this teaches Mercury not to pamper his kids, cuz I never heard of anyone who is into there later teens and still calls there close family freinds "auntie" and not been spoon fed life. weird that they swear and stuff at the same time though?
I know Mercury and co probably won't remember this (most likely something at the end of the fic) but I hope this teaches Mercury not to pamper his kids, cuz I never heard of anyone who is into there later teens and still calls there close family freinds "auntie" and not been spoon fed life. weird that they swear and stuff at the same time though?
