for Yuuki Yūna is A Hero - Fragments9/2/2018 c1 mOnmo
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7/7/2018 c1 luiz117
What an amazing chapter, Thank you for your hard work.
Yuuna being Yuuna is really nice to read, putting herself on the first line instead of letting the others know.
Erasing the memories was a nice trick, as well as Gin's voice.
Again, an amazing chapter, I'll be looking forward to what comes next.
What an amazing chapter, Thank you for your hard work.
Yuuna being Yuuna is really nice to read, putting herself on the first line instead of letting the others know.
Erasing the memories was a nice trick, as well as Gin's voice.
Again, an amazing chapter, I'll be looking forward to what comes next.
7/5/2018 c1 Rich Richie 0091
Good chapter and as a fan of this series, I can tell you that I like this fiction and it makes me interested in how will you expand the story. Though I want to point out some trivial errors that actually didn't matter to the story anyway:
1. Ever since the first generation of heroes, the hero system has been improved to be stronger than ever, it wasn't revamped into something weaker. This can be seen when the second generation managed to destroy a perfect vertex when the first generation can't even scratch it without imbuing themselves with a fairy that is at least as strong as Shuten Doji.
2. Shinju-sama and Ten no Kami is a name and there is only one of them. There is no need to add "the" in front of them.
Well, those aside, I think the characters' personality is depicted accurately, and... I frankly don't have anything more to say without saying anything needlessly.
Good chapter and as a fan of this series, I can tell you that I like this fiction and it makes me interested in how will you expand the story. Though I want to point out some trivial errors that actually didn't matter to the story anyway:
1. Ever since the first generation of heroes, the hero system has been improved to be stronger than ever, it wasn't revamped into something weaker. This can be seen when the second generation managed to destroy a perfect vertex when the first generation can't even scratch it without imbuing themselves with a fairy that is at least as strong as Shuten Doji.
2. Shinju-sama and Ten no Kami is a name and there is only one of them. There is no need to add "the" in front of them.
Well, those aside, I think the characters' personality is depicted accurately, and... I frankly don't have anything more to say without saying anything needlessly.
7/2/2018 c1 Redargetlam95
Don't know if my other review posted or not, but like most of your work, it made me want to read on, and sparked my interest in this series, well done!
Don't know if my other review posted or not, but like most of your work, it made me want to read on, and sparked my interest in this series, well done!
7/2/2018 c1 Redargetlam95
To concur with the other reviewers, I came in answer to the call/begging for more attention that you had in Asylum, but I'll more often than not take a look at every story you are currently working on to avoid Seerking withdrawals!
To concur with the other reviewers, I came in answer to the call/begging for more attention that you had in Asylum, but I'll more often than not take a look at every story you are currently working on to avoid Seerking withdrawals!
6/26/2018 c1 Nathaniel Gabriel Baker
Have to agree with the Greatazuredragon that this is pretty interesting despite not knowing the series. Is this going to have anymore chapters added to it, or will it just be a collection of one shots?
Have to agree with the Greatazuredragon that this is pretty interesting despite not knowing the series. Is this going to have anymore chapters added to it, or will it just be a collection of one shots?
6/26/2018 c1 FanatischerLeser
Well typical magical girl stuff so far. Good capter but nothing new and I must confess that I don't know the sorce material so I can't say much to that. Still nice reading good for something small for inbetween.
Well typical magical girl stuff so far. Good capter but nothing new and I must confess that I don't know the sorce material so I can't say much to that. Still nice reading good for something small for inbetween.
6/26/2018 c1 
3Greatazuredragon
Hmmm, I must admit that I know nothing about the source material, having come here because of your heartfelt plead in the 'asylum' section, but all in all it's a relatively interesting work, even if I'm quite lost regarding some of it. ;p
3GreatazuredragonHmmm, I must admit that I know nothing about the source material, having come here because of your heartfelt plead in the 'asylum' section, but all in all it's a relatively interesting work, even if I'm quite lost regarding some of it. ;p
