for Age of Magneto4/19/2019 c6 Makanie
I think without your OC this story could be good. Unfortunately she is just not written well or particular interesting and therefore all the time a negative distraction from better parts of the story.
I think without your OC this story could be good. Unfortunately she is just not written well or particular interesting and therefore all the time a negative distraction from better parts of the story.
3/18/2019 c67 Arly Quinn
OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH! everything about it, especially all the sass and teasing it's good to see James and Maria take after they're parents
OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH! everything about it, especially all the sass and teasing it's good to see James and Maria take after they're parents
3/12/2019 c67 
49robbiepoo2341
Okay, but everything about this epilogue is wonderful and I love it but my favorite part by far is the fact that Peter is bothering his sorta-sister via water guns. And then when she full named him? omg. I love these two as siblings more than I love most things.
All of this fluff was SO needed after all the work it took to get here. omg. what are we going to do with these wonderful idiots?
49robbiepoo2341Okay, but everything about this epilogue is wonderful and I love it but my favorite part by far is the fact that Peter is bothering his sorta-sister via water guns. And then when she full named him? omg. I love these two as siblings more than I love most things.
All of this fluff was SO needed after all the work it took to get here. omg. what are we going to do with these wonderful idiots?
2/23/2019 c66 Arly Quinn
BEST. ENDING. EVER! You couldn't have ended it any better! Everyone's so happy how can you not love it? I'm sad it's over of course, but we still have that epilogue which i will DEFINITELY be watching for. <3
BEST. ENDING. EVER! You couldn't have ended it any better! Everyone's so happy how can you not love it? I'm sad it's over of course, but we still have that epilogue which i will DEFINITELY be watching for. <3
2/18/2019 c66 robbiepoo2341
I LOVE THAT LAST SCENE TO ITTY BITTY PIECES
LOOK AT THE WARMTH AND THE GROWTH AND ALL OF IT
CHARLES APOLOGIZED
SCOTT ADMITTED HE WANTS LOGAN AROUND
I KNOW THERE WAS FLUFF AND STUFF BEFORE THIS BUT I CAN'T STOP CELEBRATING THAT LAST SCENE
WHAT A WAY TO END THIS STORY
IT IS SO HOPEFUL AND WONDERFUL AND GOOD AND PURE AND HEALTHY AND I JUST
GAH
I AM NOT SORRY FOR CAPSLOCKING IN YOUR REVIEWS
AT ALL
IT WAS SO GOOD
I LOVE THAT LAST SCENE TO ITTY BITTY PIECES
LOOK AT THE WARMTH AND THE GROWTH AND ALL OF IT
CHARLES APOLOGIZED
SCOTT ADMITTED HE WANTS LOGAN AROUND
I KNOW THERE WAS FLUFF AND STUFF BEFORE THIS BUT I CAN'T STOP CELEBRATING THAT LAST SCENE
WHAT A WAY TO END THIS STORY
IT IS SO HOPEFUL AND WONDERFUL AND GOOD AND PURE AND HEALTHY AND I JUST
GAH
I AM NOT SORRY FOR CAPSLOCKING IN YOUR REVIEWS
AT ALL
IT WAS SO GOOD
1/31/2019 c5 4J.D. Finck
Nice to see Peter show up - I thought the jumbled timelines would be confusing (they usually are), but so far, things are flowing well, and it's fairly easy to follow. Even in this alternate reality, Peter is an orphan - which he should be, it is an integral part of his character. Good job. I hope, if Pete is a reoccurring character, that you don't let him adjust with no lingering sadness and grief. Another good chapter, peppered with great moments and character development.
4J.D. FinckNice to see Peter show up - I thought the jumbled timelines would be confusing (they usually are), but so far, things are flowing well, and it's fairly easy to follow. Even in this alternate reality, Peter is an orphan - which he should be, it is an integral part of his character. Good job. I hope, if Pete is a reoccurring character, that you don't let him adjust with no lingering sadness and grief. Another good chapter, peppered with great moments and character development.
1/27/2019 c4 J.D. Finck
You write a good Cap. This story is about the grey area between right and wrong, so it's good to see a character like Cap caught up in it, sometimes doing the wrong thing as he is trying to do the right thing. This is good stuff. I especially love how you are approaching Magneto. I don't like when people try to make him a noble, misunderstood hero - he is complex, he is hard to nail - often times he is right, but almost always, he thinks the ends justify any means, and he is blind to his OWN prejudices. He also refuses to acknowledge that, while he wants to build a haven for mutantkind, he is always the one ruling the kingdom...and heaven help any mutant who stands in his way. Villain? Not entirely. Hero? No. Unlike Cap, he is in the grey area. Thanks for writing him that way.
You write a good Cap. This story is about the grey area between right and wrong, so it's good to see a character like Cap caught up in it, sometimes doing the wrong thing as he is trying to do the right thing. This is good stuff. I especially love how you are approaching Magneto. I don't like when people try to make him a noble, misunderstood hero - he is complex, he is hard to nail - often times he is right, but almost always, he thinks the ends justify any means, and he is blind to his OWN prejudices. He also refuses to acknowledge that, while he wants to build a haven for mutantkind, he is always the one ruling the kingdom...and heaven help any mutant who stands in his way. Villain? Not entirely. Hero? No. Unlike Cap, he is in the grey area. Thanks for writing him that way.
1/27/2019 c3 J.D. Finck
"I prefer Hank, actually."
"I'll keep that in mind, Henry."
This is want you do so well, snarky back and forth lines that crackle, and that reveal so much about the characters. You are so good at dialogue. I'm jealous, and I love it.
"I prefer Hank, actually."
"I'll keep that in mind, Henry."
This is want you do so well, snarky back and forth lines that crackle, and that reveal so much about the characters. You are so good at dialogue. I'm jealous, and I love it.
1/18/2019 c65 Arly Quinn
I'm so happy for everyone! It was interesting seeing the two completely different types of marrige/proposal. I love how both couples got the version they wanted, it's nice to see everyone officially becoming family. And I love Tony and Jan as Peter's parents! They're such a cute little family I'm glad Peter has them as much as I love Aunt May. And I loved seeing him all exited to have Jan as a mom, it's adorable!
And I'm so glad that Tony and K are getting along somewhat like they used to, I did feel bad for Tony because everything she's doing with logan she didn't want to do with him, but it seems like he understands a little better now.
I'm so happy for everyone! It was interesting seeing the two completely different types of marrige/proposal. I love how both couples got the version they wanted, it's nice to see everyone officially becoming family. And I love Tony and Jan as Peter's parents! They're such a cute little family I'm glad Peter has them as much as I love Aunt May. And I loved seeing him all exited to have Jan as a mom, it's adorable!
And I'm so glad that Tony and K are getting along somewhat like they used to, I did feel bad for Tony because everything she's doing with logan she didn't want to do with him, but it seems like he understands a little better now.
1/18/2019 c65 49robbiepoo2341
I DON'T EVEN KNOW IF I CAN WRITE A COHERENT REVIEW BEYOND JUST GIGGLES AN INHUMAN NOISES OF HAPPINESS.
THE SAND CASTLE! THE JEAN AND SCOTT FLIRTING! THE IMPROMPTU WEDDING! MATT PULLING IT ALL TOGETHER FOR THEM!
EVERYONE IS FINALLY HAPPY AND IT'S ABOUT DANG TIME
49robbiepoo2341I DON'T EVEN KNOW IF I CAN WRITE A COHERENT REVIEW BEYOND JUST GIGGLES AN INHUMAN NOISES OF HAPPINESS.
THE SAND CASTLE! THE JEAN AND SCOTT FLIRTING! THE IMPROMPTU WEDDING! MATT PULLING IT ALL TOGETHER FOR THEM!
EVERYONE IS FINALLY HAPPY AND IT'S ABOUT DANG TIME
1/15/2019 c64 Arly Quinn
I'm so glad K helped they're relationship, they really needed it! It's so nice knowing officially that everythings cleared up. And it's also great to see K warming up to jean, Maybe she can get past her being a telepath.
And It's so sweet that they got a little vacation with the kids! I absolutely love how exited all the little ones were, especially Katie! <3
I'm so glad K helped they're relationship, they really needed it! It's so nice knowing officially that everythings cleared up. And it's also great to see K warming up to jean, Maybe she can get past her being a telepath.
And It's so sweet that they got a little vacation with the kids! I absolutely love how exited all the little ones were, especially Katie! <3
1/15/2019 c64 robbiepoo2341
Oh, I love all of this. I love seeing the way K has made ripples that have turned into tidal waves with this team, and I love seeing everyone start to get on the same page. I stand by what Kate said in the 714: so much of the problem the X-Men have is simply that they don't know how to communicate. If they could just pull their heads out, their lives would be so. much. easier. So it's nice to see that, in this universe at least, they're learning how to live with each other a little better.
I continue to love the fact that Kurt is our little matchmaker, by the way. I love that he is constantly trying to get Logan and K together and that he's smart enough to pick up on romantic cues even at this age. Total heartbreaker in the making.
The girl in Japan were obviously THE CUTEST too. I love the way you write little kids; it's obvious that you approach it from the advantage of being a mom and seeing the simultaneous innocence and troublemaking that kids are capable of.
This chapter really feels like it's setting a tone of hope, and honestly, it's been a long time coming. For everyone involved. I'm so THRILLED to see them all happy like this. Even Charles is getting in on the character growth! Go Charles!
Oh, I love all of this. I love seeing the way K has made ripples that have turned into tidal waves with this team, and I love seeing everyone start to get on the same page. I stand by what Kate said in the 714: so much of the problem the X-Men have is simply that they don't know how to communicate. If they could just pull their heads out, their lives would be so. much. easier. So it's nice to see that, in this universe at least, they're learning how to live with each other a little better.
I continue to love the fact that Kurt is our little matchmaker, by the way. I love that he is constantly trying to get Logan and K together and that he's smart enough to pick up on romantic cues even at this age. Total heartbreaker in the making.
The girl in Japan were obviously THE CUTEST too. I love the way you write little kids; it's obvious that you approach it from the advantage of being a mom and seeing the simultaneous innocence and troublemaking that kids are capable of.
This chapter really feels like it's setting a tone of hope, and honestly, it's been a long time coming. For everyone involved. I'm so THRILLED to see them all happy like this. Even Charles is getting in on the character growth! Go Charles!
1/15/2019 c63 Arly Quinn
I absolutely love how Scott handled that conversation! and honestly as much as I like Charles, I think Scott would make a much better leader of the group even though he can lose his temper at times, he still honors trust. And I'm happy to see K and Tony getting along a little better, even though it didn't work out they can still be friendly!
And It's adorable they went on vacation with the kids! It's nice to see them together as a family!including Little Kurt
I absolutely love how Scott handled that conversation! and honestly as much as I like Charles, I think Scott would make a much better leader of the group even though he can lose his temper at times, he still honors trust. And I'm happy to see K and Tony getting along a little better, even though it didn't work out they can still be friendly!
And It's adorable they went on vacation with the kids! It's nice to see them together as a family!including Little Kurt
1/9/2019 c62 Arly Quinn
I love K so MUCH! She handled things beautifully in this chapter too! She always knows just what to say to get people to listen. I kinda feel bad for jean because K is so paranoid around her, but when she went into that room from her perspective I can completely understand why she's so paranoid. it's kinda creepy that they both where there just waiting for her.
I love K so MUCH! She handled things beautifully in this chapter too! She always knows just what to say to get people to listen. I kinda feel bad for jean because K is so paranoid around her, but when she went into that room from her perspective I can completely understand why she's so paranoid. it's kinda creepy that they both where there just waiting for her.
1/9/2019 c63 robbiepoo2341
Oh, I love this. A lot. I love it when Scott actually stands up for himself to the crummy father figures he's had in his life (Charles included), and it feels. so. good. to have everything out in the open air. It really does. That whole conversation was so satisfying.
I also love how Tony and K are feeling their way around their new normal. I love that you acknowledge how WEIRD it has to feel to both of them that they're time-sharing Katie, and yet they're starting to get back to a feeling of warmth and friendliness that was the reason they liked each other in the first place. They DO work well together. Even (and especially) as just-friends.
And then the girls in Japan? omg. everything about that is THE BEST POSSIBLE THING
Oh, I love this. A lot. I love it when Scott actually stands up for himself to the crummy father figures he's had in his life (Charles included), and it feels. so. good. to have everything out in the open air. It really does. That whole conversation was so satisfying.
I also love how Tony and K are feeling their way around their new normal. I love that you acknowledge how WEIRD it has to feel to both of them that they're time-sharing Katie, and yet they're starting to get back to a feeling of warmth and friendliness that was the reason they liked each other in the first place. They DO work well together. Even (and especially) as just-friends.
And then the girls in Japan? omg. everything about that is THE BEST POSSIBLE THING
