for The Black Knight10/29/2018 c2 YuukiAsuna-Chan
28 is way over leveled for floor one, helli doubt it is actually possible to reach that level on floor one in that time frame. They would get little to no exp after like level 10 or so.
28 is way over leveled for floor one, helli doubt it is actually possible to reach that level on floor one in that time frame. They would get little to no exp after like level 10 or so.
7/6/2018 c2 Angron
I did not understand why you moved your fanfic from crossover to Code Geass? finally, let's move on.
some critics: your fanfiction is too Lelouch-centric and does not fit enough the views of other characters. it's supposed to be a crossover with Sao don't forget it.
2) I did not understand why Lelouch invites Asuna but refuses to integrate Kirito in his party and even talk with him? because they are betas testers and rivals?
Very dumb!
the stakes are no longer the same because Sao is now a death's game!
Kirito being the second best beta tester after him, Lelouch should put his rivalry aside and ally himself with Kirito to increase his chances of defeating the game. It's a missed opportunity
I do not know Code Geass very well, but Lelouch isn't supposed to be the smartest character in the world?
this movement was neither very intelligent nor very astucious on his part.
3) I hope that Lelouch's presence will influence the fight and that it will not be canon!
otherwise, I think Lelouch may miss an other great opportunity, avoid Diabel's death and the beater event.
Continue please and think about what I told you.
I did not understand why you moved your fanfic from crossover to Code Geass? finally, let's move on.
some critics: your fanfiction is too Lelouch-centric and does not fit enough the views of other characters. it's supposed to be a crossover with Sao don't forget it.
2) I did not understand why Lelouch invites Asuna but refuses to integrate Kirito in his party and even talk with him? because they are betas testers and rivals?
Very dumb!
the stakes are no longer the same because Sao is now a death's game!
Kirito being the second best beta tester after him, Lelouch should put his rivalry aside and ally himself with Kirito to increase his chances of defeating the game. It's a missed opportunity
I do not know Code Geass very well, but Lelouch isn't supposed to be the smartest character in the world?
this movement was neither very intelligent nor very astucious on his part.
3) I hope that Lelouch's presence will influence the fight and that it will not be canon!
otherwise, I think Lelouch may miss an other great opportunity, avoid Diabel's death and the beater event.
Continue please and think about what I told you.
7/6/2018 c2 Guest
Finally! an SAO&CG crossover
Finally! an SAO&CG crossover
6/20/2018 c1 Angron
interesting but the description of Lelouch reminds me of Kirito, who after learning that he was adopted distanced himself from his family and became passionate about video games, which has pushed to play Sao. Lelouch being the best player in Tokyo, I guess Kirito is the second and rival/friend of Lelouch?
pity that the point of view of this first chapter is only a Lelouch centric and we don't see Lelouch and Kirito get together, since they are both beta-testers, they must necessarily know each other.
Lelouch and Kirito eventually becoming friends and to establish a guild from the beginning or later (even if guilds free officially only on the third floor) would have been an interesting twist of the events
I can't wait to see Lelouch meet Kirito and his harem :D
is your fanfic inspired by anime, novel or Sao Progressive?
interesting but the description of Lelouch reminds me of Kirito, who after learning that he was adopted distanced himself from his family and became passionate about video games, which has pushed to play Sao. Lelouch being the best player in Tokyo, I guess Kirito is the second and rival/friend of Lelouch?
pity that the point of view of this first chapter is only a Lelouch centric and we don't see Lelouch and Kirito get together, since they are both beta-testers, they must necessarily know each other.
Lelouch and Kirito eventually becoming friends and to establish a guild from the beginning or later (even if guilds free officially only on the third floor) would have been an interesting twist of the events
I can't wait to see Lelouch meet Kirito and his harem :D
is your fanfic inspired by anime, novel or Sao Progressive?
5/29/2018 c1 Guest
woahh sao themed fanfic? Nice one author-san!
woahh sao themed fanfic? Nice one author-san!
