for Capsicle6/25/2018 c7 
2Centurion Autolycus
All of a sudden Bucky and Natasha are lovers? That just seemed to come from out of nowhere! You could have eased us into that a little more smoothly. (Of course I have to admit I'm still puzzling over why Winter wasn't killed when they riddled him with bullets back in Chapter five wasn't it? I mean, as dangerous as he apparently was, I can't fathom why they would have wanted to take him alive except that of course the story requires them to.)
2Centurion AutolycusAll of a sudden Bucky and Natasha are lovers? That just seemed to come from out of nowhere! You could have eased us into that a little more smoothly. (Of course I have to admit I'm still puzzling over why Winter wasn't killed when they riddled him with bullets back in Chapter five wasn't it? I mean, as dangerous as he apparently was, I can't fathom why they would have wanted to take him alive except that of course the story requires them to.)
5/29/2018 c6 Centurion Autolycus
I liked the first couple of chapters, but the way you keep skipping back and forth through time has left me thoroughly confused. Half the time you make it sound like Winter Soldier is an assassin working for SHIELD. And then finally after six chapters, you come back to Steve and the story apparently hasn't moved forward from when he just awoke?
I liked the first couple of chapters, but the way you keep skipping back and forth through time has left me thoroughly confused. Half the time you make it sound like Winter Soldier is an assassin working for SHIELD. And then finally after six chapters, you come back to Steve and the story apparently hasn't moved forward from when he just awoke?
